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Her Smile

She was Smiling Wide today, Everyone saw the happiness on her face, And me? Well,behind her Beautiful, Enchanting, Alluring, Charismatic, Amazingly Cute Smile, I saw her Sadness. Yes,she is a divine expert at hiding it. but,it can't hide away from Me.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/13/2024 12:21:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/4/2019 8:26:00 AM

You could classify this as free verse...a well written one too.

Pratham Patel
Date: 9/6/2019 5:00:00 AM

thanks for you suggestion! I've updated my poem and added it.