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Her Round Light

Her Round Light Why do lovers write of moon, of sun, of stars? Or fireflies kept in jars? Is a woman comparable with light? Can she, will she Illuminate the night? Can grace, can beauty, be combined with might? The answer friend I say is yes. With mind, with fingers I caress. I want her more, never less. Hand to heart forever pressed. Yes my love for her I enthusiastically confess. The colours of planets combined with her scent. Her light like a halo roundly bent. The sea, the sun, the moon and stars, are all witnesses that grace is heaven sent.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/26/2023 6:10:00 PM

Your sweetie is smart Richard, to have captured your heart and mind in such a. delightful way. And must be special to have attracted your attention. :) A lovely, sweet write. :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/15/2023 2:22:00 AM

Lovely tribute to your wife. It's very romantic and light and airy. Beautiful

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/15/2023 7:23:00 AM

Aww, thanks Eileen. :0)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2023 1:00:00 AM

So amazingly beautiful and romantic, Richard. Thanks for your recent visit to my poetry.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/15/2023 7:24:00 AM

My pleasure. Thanks for dropping by.

John Hamilton

Date: 10/13/2023 7:56:00 PM

Yeah wholeheartedly agree beautiful writing Rick!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2023 7:18:00 AM

Thanks John, my sweetie is my muse.

Bill Baker

Date: 10/13/2023 3:54:00 PM

A lovely love poem, Rick. You share with us the questions and the undeniable answers, with poetic words of love. A FAV for my list, my friend. Write On! Bill

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2023 7:18:00 AM

Thanks Bill.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/13/2023 1:44:00 PM

what a beautiful profession of love! The images captivated me. True love is a gift of grace that is Heaven sent. Nicely done, Richard. Have a wonderful weekend, Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/14/2023 7:20:00 AM

You as well Sara. Thanks for your visit. Give bill a big hug.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 10/13/2023 11:04:00 AM

Wow, amazing ! While reading your poem I was thinking how beautiful it would be if someone write a poem like this one for you. I got married recently, I have written a couple of poems for my husband, but he is not a literary person, and I am sure he doesn't even know that I have penned down my feelings for him in my poetry lol.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/13/2023 11:06:00 AM

You should share your poems with him. He might be inspired. Thanks for your kind comment.

Tom Woody

Date: 10/13/2023 7:46:00 AM

A beautiful ode to a lover. To me, there is no greater creation than a beautiful woman. The stars pale in comparison. Exquisite write

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/13/2023 11:06:00 AM

Much appreciated.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/13/2023 7:43:00 AM

Wonderfully done. Beautiful. God bless you, sweet friend. Love, Gina

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/13/2023 7:46:00 AM

Much appreciated. My Sweetie is a gift of grace. We met in Mexico 31 years ago. I moved across the country to be with her.