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Her Road I Did Not Take

Her road I did not take, through woods of gold, Where birches bend and secrets old unfold. The sunlit path that glimmered in her eyes, Led far from where my lonesome journey lies. A singing bird , a call I could not hear, For fear of shadows in my heart, indeed. Her voice, a melody among the trees, Yet I walked on, ignoring gentle pleas. She wandered where the wildflowers yellow bloom so bright, While I chose trails that vanished in the night. The echoes of her laughter haunt the air, A song of love, of dreams I could not share. Now, in the dusk, I see her distant light, A road I did not take fades out of sight. And still, her fragrance lingers on the leaves. Her road I did not take, Under autumn's golden gaze, Silent paths that memories make, No longer there to take.

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Date: 9/3/2024 5:00:00 PM
Dear James, such poignant beauty spills from your golden pen. The tender agony of the road not taken. Your vivid imagery, creative metaphors and artful touches of internal rhymes paint an emotional, compelling portrait of lost love. “her fragrance lingers on the leaves” - wow! Your poem is even more exquisite with a second and third read. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/4/2024 9:56:00 PM
Hi James, no, I’m not a teacher, but I’m curious why you asked? As for what people like; write for yourself first, write for the enjoyment and thrill of the creative process. Write from imagination, inspiration or real life and you will find an audience that likes what you write because it resonates with them. But most importantly, reach out to other poets here by reading and commenting on their work to build a following for your work. What I see in Her Road I Did Not Take is a wonderful gift for poetry.
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James Mclain
Date: 9/3/2024 11:04:00 PM
Are you a teacher, I didn't take English classes past the seventh grade. Took band class twice each day.
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James Mclain
Date: 9/3/2024 11:03:00 PM
Thank you Susan for the wonderful comment, it's getting increasingly hard to write what people like. My Best, James

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