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Her Reluctant Farewell

I take one last look at your disappointed face As one glistening tear slides down your cheek But I no longer wish to stay in this place A life of adventure I wish to seek The romance we kindled must come to a close Our relationship ends now that I’m to depart I do wish that this breakup were not so morose Only I have committed that my life shall restart As you look at me from the balcony above And I at you from the street below I bless you with my everlasting love Adieu, my dear for now I must go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/3/2010 11:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Iolanda's "Untold Secrets" contest Savannah. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2010 5:50:00 PM
A strong woman you made her. SAssy! LUv, Andrea and Congratulations!
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Date: 5/2/2010 11:47:00 AM
very nicely done congrats on your win faleshia
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Date: 5/2/2010 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations Savannah on your 2nd place winning poem!! Great work!! :) Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/1/2010 7:15:00 PM
Wow, this is super..congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 5/1/2010 6:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this one. Nicely done.
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:26:00 PM
Congratulations Savannah on your second place in this fun contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/1/2010 4:56:00 PM
Congrats Savannah on your 2nd place win in Iolanda's contest.. with this beautiful Quatrain filled with emotion and regret... enjoy your special victory...luv... from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:56:00 PM
Very nice expressions. I enjoyed it
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Date: 4/28/2010 2:14:00 PM
nice telling him,..p.d.
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Date: 4/28/2010 1:27:00 PM
Nicely done! The one thing that is so frustrating about these contests? Posting an entry and then reading so many that are much better than mine. Then again, that's what I love about these contests, too. This one is very good, in my humble opinion.
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Date: 4/28/2010 12:38:00 PM
Great Quatrain that should do well in the contest...So many thoughts on this one picture..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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