Kash Poet Poet Sijo

Her Raised Feet In the Air

Parting those slender legs she raised her bare feet in the air,
she was fully ready with her slim body resting on the palms,
next moment she threw herself--a perfect landing on her feet.





**CLICK on "About this poem" (Change your thinking and the world will change)
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Placement: 3rd (Feb.2012)

By:kashinath karmakar(27th January 2012)

Contest:On Your Feet

By:Nette Onclaud

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Nette Onclaud February 15, 2012 at 11:47 AM okay, kashi.. hope it works for that transformation thingy!!... congrats on your win in my contest.. huggs to span; finals can be tiresome!..:)

Charlotte Puddifoot February 2, 2012 at 5:15 PM congrats on your win in the contest, a sijo written with great ability and agility, we both wrote along similar lines - gymnastics and ballet :-)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 2, 2012 at 2:35 AM Congratulations Kash very good took me off side for a moment x

Greg Stanley February 1, 2012 at 7:57 PM Ah... sounds like a balance beam; my thoughts were going in a different direction, then I caught myself, very nice and a big congratulations on your win, Greg

Jon Arno February 1, 2012 at 5:44 PM Congratulations on your great write. Good job Kash. Best, Jon

Andrea Dietrich February 1, 2012 at 3:42 PM Awesome, Kash. Yours truly was one of my favorites. Congrats on your win.

Debbie Guzzi February 1, 2012 at 3:07 PM A very difficult subject to write meaningfully about and yet I really liked your take Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Bob Quigley February 1, 2012 at 11:26 AM Excellent Kash. Change your thinking indeed. Loved this.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 1, 2012 at 9:09 AM congrats Kash on a wonderful win for this excellent write luv.. enjoyed the view and imagery ...

Carrie Richards February 1, 2012 at 8:12 AM I am not surprised to see this in the winner's list! You used such imagination coming up with this inspiration for something different.........and loved your postscript especially! yes...changing our thinking can change the world in many instances!

Carol Sunshine Brown February 1, 2012 at 5:30 AM Congratulations on your win in Nette's "On Your Feet" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi January 31, 2012 at 8:19 AM hahaha, this is even beautiful in intimate way, I think! :)

Lizanne Scholtz January 30, 2012 at 10:55 AM Love it Kash, thank you for your congrats, best wishes Elizabeth

Carrie Richards January 29, 2012 at 8:04 PM Love it!!! The first thoughts going through some warped minds, are going to be rather disappointed....LOL !!! She has to be pretty limber do do this trick!! :) PS...thanks again for taking a peek at mine...this time I knew I needed to double check!! :) I needed to count my fingers and toes to be sure!!! hahaha!

M.I.A . January 29, 2012 at 7:45 PM LoL, love the message here Kash. pretty witty with a twist behind. btw, I just found out that about the soupmail is actually being used! means that i thought it was a feature only for subscriber. and you sent me a soupmail about your poem 'Talk To Me' that i was looking for. just read it and love it, pretty intense the way you build the emotions there. (sorry for not reading it sooner) ~.~

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2012 at 6:28 PM GREAT picture, Kash. so what came first, the picture or the poem? I think your title is EXCELLENT. Kash Poet January 29, 2012 at 1:29 PM The picture came first in mind:)

Sara Kendrick January 28, 2012 at 10:54 AM Good luck in the contest with this creative that had my mind twirling as well..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Samual Ronthorpe January 28, 2012 at 2:43 AM Honestly, I don't write much in this style, but you did a great job telling the story and keeping it interesting along the way. I enjoyed this alot. Good luck with your contest.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 27, 2012 at 11:36 PM Wow, didn't see that coming! LOL. I have to admit, my mind was going elsewhere with the first two lines. You've got a winner here. Very creative!! Blessings, Rhonda

Nette Onclaud January 27, 2012 at 11:31 PM thanks for supporting my contest, kashi... come visit! miis ya and huggs!

Andrea Dietrich January 27, 2012 at 8:36 PM hahaha, I thought you were going somewhere else with this one. But it LANDED on her feet!! So cute, Kash. I have thought up one sijo for my two but have not posted it yet. Maybe I'll do that right before going off. Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire January 27, 2012 at 2:38 PM Very clever, Kash. I still walk on my hands and always land on my feet. This is a unique and creative entry for the contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn