Her Name Is Winter

She rides into town with a storm as her steed
With clicking ice spurs, and rattling reins
With somber delivery and the bleak look of gloom
Bursting with pride as the old year must end 

She shoves her way into the house out of spite
A dooms-day gray cloud, who brings her own blight
Leaving a trail of footprints and mud
Building a nest out of leftover crumbs

Flapping her wings and spinning the clock
Strutting her youth at the stroke of midnight
She stalks on wet feet, with some snow on her boots
She shouts out the news that your taxes are due
No care in the world that she makes us feel blue!

Her windows are dark, and her doorway is bare
She holds a firm grip, till the end of her stay
Yet, slowly and surely, against good advice
Intrudes like a flood, as she watches creeks rise

At last comes the sun, to shoo her away
To thaws her cold grip,  and her frown of surprise
With remorse, she announces... it's time for goodbye! 




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George   Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 7:49 AM
Sensational personification, Carrie.
Mehta Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 8:25 AM
Enjoyed your expressions on January and congrats on the win, Carrie
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 2:43 PM
- Hello January, contest is judged / / Sponsored by: Vicky Tsiluma - Congratulations on your winning poem, Carrie. - Nice to take part - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 11:20 AM
I can feel the rhythmic click of ice spurs as the steed gallops its way through January. Congratulations on placing in the contest. It's nice to stop by for a visit and read your ever colorful poetry. Big Smiles, Dane Ann
Tsiluma Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 9:47 AM
Beautifully done Carrie! You paint a grim picture of January - it certainly would be welcome to say goodbye. Very well written!
Guzzi Avatar
October 26, 2013 at 2:49 PM
Congrad's on your win, well done! Excellent personification of Winter, I bet Sheri thought where's the science LOL to me I did personification but labeled it quatrain LOL glad to be "down here near YOU" Light & Love
A  Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 8:54 PM
Carrie, , interesting Personifying Science poem.... congrats on the win..... Love Skat <3
A   Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 10:45 PM
Carrie, i like your entry... nice HM.... PD
Dillard Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 11:04 PM
What a nice depiction of winters entrance. And, very timely, too! RAY
Harper Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 10:46 PM
Thanks so much for this wonderful poem personifying Winter's Grip on the world. There is a science of weather but I feel that science in general doesn't like to keep us in the dark. It is a well-orchestrated poem and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks much for entering my contest.
Pettit Avatar
January 7, 2012 at 8:41 PM
She looks as if she is ready to meet Gary Cooper out on the street at high noon. Great descriptive poem that should do well in Nette's contest.
Brown Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Personification Of January" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Dufresne Avatar
January 5, 2012 at 6:30 PM
bbbbut don't hold your breath! Bbbbaby it's cold outside! Congratulations on your win, CArrie!
Sapp Avatar
January 3, 2012 at 8:19 PM
Beautifully visual Carrie. Nice write!
Sivey Avatar
January 3, 2012 at 4:27 PM
What a fantastic write you have written! Love the poem and the woman of January! Awesome Work!
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