Her Kindness - Rondine

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~Her Kindness~ (A Rondine) Her kindness just touched all people on Earth Her beguile smile could light up a whole room She loved everyone we all did assume Much loved from the first moment of her birth More than we knew then she was by all worth Were all much mistaken with her wedded groom Her kindness just touched Much loved from the first moment of her birth Her life was cut so short, most tragic doom My eyes fill with tears when I see her tomb Remember always her beauty and mirth Her kindness just touched. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 January.27.2015

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Constance La France

Date: 1/28/2015 8:46:00 AM

Dorian, you have written a beautiful poem in honour of a beautiful lady, I am sure she is smiling down on you and thanks so much for visiting my poem ''And So must I" it made me cry reading what I created ~~

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/28/2015 5:46:00 PM

Hello Broken Wings! Thank you so much my dear for your very kind visit and comments. Yes, she was in every way! I'll visit you very soon.Much appreciated! God bless you! :)Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/28/2015 2:36:00 AM

Lady Diana was the epitome of beauty on earth.She died only at 36.A great loss.God's design.Thank you D for her album.Stunning beauty.Great tribute Love>rajat

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/28/2015 5:44:00 PM

Hello Rajat! Thank you so much my dearest friend Rajat for your very kind visit and comments. Yes, she was that and much more! I'll visit you very soon.Much appreciated! God bless you! :)Love and hugs! xxxxx D. ^O^