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Her Heart Is My Sanctuary

I floated fatigued as a ship with none to steer, Banging and crashing with no sanctuary near, And then she dawned blooming: a crimson rose, Soothing with an angelic smile my heart that froze. Heart leapt sensing her move as a gentle breeze, Glancing at me like the moon, through the trees. In the morn, she sunned my cold, snowy world; In the eve, my soul froze when darkness furled. I stood wriggling, and adoring her lovely heart, Waiting for a welcome call, to my piece of art. Soon lovely petals opened and let me sail in; Her heart is my sanctuary: my greatest win. Image source: Pixabay *A 1st Place* in the following contest (judged on Sept. 1, 2020) COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE any form any theme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Stand *A 2nd Place* in the following contest (judged on Aug. 22, 2020) Sanctuary Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One *A 3rd Place* in the following contest (judged on Jan. 8, 2021) Jan. 7, 2021 (Originally posted on Aug. 22, 2020) Battle of most acclaimed 2020 POEMS Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Date: 2/11/2021 2:33:00 PM
A pleasure to find your charming poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Newton~
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 2/12/2021 5:42:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line, for the kind read and for this impressively great comment!!
Date: 1/8/2021 12:00:00 PM
Another great write, another great win, congrats Newton!
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Date: 1/8/2021 3:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, John, for great comment, congrats and the placement!!
Date: 9/4/2020 11:03:00 AM
What a great vision and expression. Thank you and congratulations! Linda
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 1/8/2021 3:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda, for great comment and the congrats!!
Date: 9/1/2020 4:54:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Newton. Janice
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Date: 9/1/2020 6:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice, for this great comment!!
Date: 9/1/2020 3:16:00 PM
Congrats and blessings :)
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 9/1/2020 3:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Regina! I love your words and your blessings!
Date: 8/22/2020 6:06:00 AM
Sounds lovely.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 8/22/2020 9:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Silent One, for giving a second place to this piece. She will feel so happy!! :) :)
Date: 8/19/2020 7:48:00 PM
Quaint, adorable. A sure Winner, Newtown, - this is so lovely!
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Newton Ranaweera
Date: 8/19/2020 8:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sigrid, for your read, the great comment and your kind wish!!

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