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Her Forbidden Fruit

Forbidden fruit warned she could be touched by none So succulent she could not be tasted by just anyone Her name alone made men crave her even more Plucking her saying just to taste they truly swore But they never stopped passing her all around When sweetness faded she laid upon the ground Callously tossed there laying bruised and beaten So cruel not to end her, but leave her half eaten Soon days flew by she slowly sank into the soil Ashamed how they let her very sweetness spoil So proud that she was praying for a kind death But soon she was transformed and took a new breath Yet still forbidden fruit but now with something new When the men came again, it'd be the day they'd rue Once again they plucked her from her sturdy tree She swore her pain they would surely feel and see She was still so sweet and succulent for them to eat But to survive this toxic cocktail would be their greatest feat Named "the little apple of death" a fitting name with a just cause Her sweet fruit would be the last these men ever tasted or saw

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Date: 11/4/2019 7:28:00 PM
Cowabunga! Revenge never tasted so sweet! Great narrative, my friend! Cheers, Gershon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/4/2019 8:18:00 PM
Thank you Gershon I always love when you visit! Never stop laughing !;)
Date: 11/3/2019 7:03:00 PM
I like this one a lot, a nice change of style for you, you are getting better every day!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 7:39:00 PM
Haha thank you so much John!;)
Date: 11/3/2019 5:27:00 AM
This is awesome. Kind wishes, Kai
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 5:41:00 AM
Thank you so very much I'm glad you liked it!;)
Date: 11/3/2019 3:08:00 AM
Loving the rhythm of this captivating piece of life experiences endured. Sadly one had to go through such. And yet, this is the life we all live in. Crazy world B! Someone is stronger than ever before!!! Unbreakable!!!! INK
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 4:37:00 AM
Why thank you so much G always love your visits!;) ahh yes life's many experiences in all their glory and so strong but even the great fall at sometime! Let's just hope it's no time soon!;) hugs!;) B
Date: 11/3/2019 2:17:00 AM
I love this... So beautifully written. A captivating poem that I'll fave. Bless you, Gina
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 4:35:00 AM
Regina thank you so very much! I do enjoy when you stop by with all your kindness thank you!;)
Date: 11/3/2019 1:36:00 AM
Your poetry has many facets, Poetess...a couple of your latest seem to resemble short ballads with their descriptive, song like rhyme of various human trials and tribulations -- t'is all good stuff, methinks! With much affection. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/3/2019 4:34:00 AM
Ahh so you think I'm branching out then? Lol!! Well I can only write what I am feeling so I guess I just may be! Thank you John you have always been there to support my work and it is greatly appreciated! Warmest affection!;)

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