Her Floppy Red Hat

It was a windy summer day,
in the quaint, little island town.
Wind gusts coming from the bay,
pulling flags and umbrellas down.

I watched a little girl,
running through the sand.
Laughing she would spin and twirl,
a seashell clasped in her hand.

One thing stood out from the rest,
a large floppy hat of bright red.
She proudly wore it, her Sunday best,
it was big enough to cover her head.

She came searching for seashells,
pretty ones that she could share.
Running along, she tripped and fell.
Up went her hat, flying through the air.

She began to look all around, 
her floppy red hat was not there.
In the water, or wet sandy ground,
it could be almost anywhere.

She walked back to her beach mat,
got closer, stopped and stared.
There was her big, floppy red hat.
Returned by someone who cared.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 6/19/2023 1:21:00 PM
This is one of those poems that makes you smile. Very nice, Sandra. I wonder who that person who cared was? Hoping you are well.
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Date: 6/11/2023 6:55:00 AM
Oh my Sandy! First of all , prior to reading this, I was thinking to write a poem about the ocean with palm tree , blowing in the wind. Then I found myself reading about this girl at the ocean with her big floppy hat , blowing in the wind. I fully enjoyed this sweet , fun poem ! A Fave for me :)
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/11/2023 7:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi! Once again, we share a thought. So glad you enjoyed this "fun" poem. And...made it a fave too!
Date: 6/10/2023 12:15:00 PM
Playing on the beach, as only a sprite of a child can. I enjoyed your tale, Sandra... sans hat or not ;-)
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/10/2023 6:58:00 PM
Thank you Lin. I love to hear their laughter and I laugh seeing them covered in sand.
Date: 6/10/2023 10:53:00 AM
A wry little poem my friend. Well done. It's beach weather here today in Saskatoon. May have to take advantage. Have a great day.
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 6/10/2023 7:00:00 PM
Thank you David, take advantage of your beach weather, it is gone in a moment.
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