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Her Far-Off Look

in lobes, winnowed fans far-off look scans the future flight of butterflies tease, tickles eyes, curious beauty in obscurity 3/31/2022 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIER CHOICE Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 4/5/2022 1:25:00 PM
You have answered the question for me "what does a far off look mean" in this poem.
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Date: 4/2/2022 3:10:00 PM
Mysterious Tanka, Kim. I liked it. Hugs, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2022 6:37:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/1/2022 12:56:00 AM
great tanka. Loved the last line. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2022 7:28:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 3/31/2022 10:01:00 PM
Oh so clever is this, Kim, love the blending of nature
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2022 7:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, Harry!
Date: 3/31/2022 6:05:00 PM
Nice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2022 7:28:00 AM
Thank you, Debra!

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