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Her Eyes Said

My girl wanted to go the matinee movies, so she asked me too Miss Pretty Brown Eyes was ever a looker for a good time in the stone soul theater cool, dark veil blue And so was me too Her Cadillac eyes said, Lets bounce ... make the quarter to one, “Couples Special” Have a some quality celluloid time; drink up the lemonade, and inside shade by the refill ounce Let the popcorn butter on our fingertips get sweetly licked, while I get a squint-eye scare-boo with my baby Teddy boo you And then my cuddly she bear gave a spicy wink at mild me too When the silver screen got to moving, and the projector screams got drowned out by next row surround sound moan stereo The usher came and removed that balcony couple who had got tongue magnet too personal Their steamy attraction forced the matinee lovers to have to go Then, I became too scared to make a ticket smooch move anymore But my girl, she was brave as a go-getter can-do ... Yet the same kind of courage wasn’t in me too And my honeybee looked angrily at the screen, and said: Boy, what is wrong with you! I could tell by the passion flame in her fiery eyes, kissing was on the credit roll menu And she said impatiently, romance is on a dwindle chance mood: Don’t you wanna start a little sumptin sumptin, it’s what we came here to do Don’t make these empty arms file a non-harassment suit This loving mind wanna taste some chocolate lip sugar ... so tell me the full disclosure truth, how ‘bout you? And my cold feet reluctantly said: yeah, me too

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/29/2018 7:47:00 PM
Kiss the girl Freddie...it's the least you can do...Very creative write...All the best Freddie...Happy New Year
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Date: 12/29/2018 11:32:00 AM
It is so funny that an incident can re-direct what you really want to do, when fear takes over and in a dark theater too. I am amazed the usher was this vigilent or diligent; there must have been a complaint. Happy New 2019 Freddie.
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