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The title was graciously suggested by Broken Wings...

 

I had a vision standing on a grassy knoll surrounded by threehundredyearoldfortifiedwalls The sun pressing heavily upon me a brisk wind cooling my sweat blowing from ocean to bay Wiping the moisture from my brow
I looked up in front I looked up of me I in front of me beheld the most I beheld beautiful the most beautiful double double rainbow rainbow
No cloud stained the voluminous blue sky only blue miraculous beauty lost inthoughtofloosingthemoment I had a vision Flashes of wonder combing the heavens Silence norainfalling The darkness complete fathomless no echoing sounds of thunder claps disturbed the night Looking into the ebony velvet the night exploded with thousands of fingers of light flashing across the heavens For long moments the dancing splendor filled my vision awe struck and bewildered fleeting onlymomentsinalifetime I had a vision Beautiful words written so sweetly songs brokenfeathersondarkgentlewings Lonely pained memories and expressions of loss frozen timelessly forever never forgotten sadsad sadsadsadsad sweetsweetsweetsweet sadsad beautifulbeautifulbeautifubeautifulbe sadsadsadsad brokenbrokenbrokenbrokenbrokenbroken sweetsweetsweetsweet wingwingwingwingwingwingwi autifulbeautifulbeautiful beautifulbeautifubeaut brokenbrokenbroken sweetsweetsw ngwingwingwing (broken ifulbeautifulbeautiful wings eetsweetsweetsweet ((())) broken) (()) wings () ((())) O (()) () O Inexplicable marvels of emotion singular events experienced only once beauty lovinglycapturedintearfilledrefrains 08/10/15

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Date: 8/11/2015 11:50:00 PM
A beautiful write James, P.D.
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James Inman
Date: 8/12/2015 2:37:00 PM
Thank you PD. Thanks for reading it.
Date: 8/11/2015 8:53:00 PM
This is truly amazing.. It's beautiful, creative, and masterfully written. Perhaps the most stunning tribute I've ever read!
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James Inman
Date: 8/11/2015 9:19:00 PM
LM, incredible comment. Thank you. I'm happy you like it.
Date: 8/11/2015 10:34:00 AM
Just beautiful line after line. Took me a minute. But what a wonderful explosion of beauty. Just wow!!!
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James Inman
Date: 8/11/2015 2:05:00 PM
Thank you Yolanda
Date: 8/11/2015 9:00:00 AM
James, I had to come back, I admire how you did the broken wings, that took skill and thanks for visiting my solitude poem
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James Inman
Date: 8/11/2015 2:12:00 PM
I wish you could see it on my computer. The rainbow looks very different and the lightning and butterfly wings have color (looses a lot when uploaded). You are always welcome here and I am very happy you like it.
Date: 8/10/2015 7:42:00 PM
I applaud you my friend for this....and in brokenwingsstyleis evenmorebliss.....I know she is flattered, she simply has to be ....IknowIwould if shewereme.....GREAT JOB
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James Inman
Date: 8/11/2015 7:33:00 AM
Thank you, Master wordsmith.
Date: 8/10/2015 5:57:00 PM
Wow!!! You penned this very beautiful, it flows eloquent in the heart of the readers. Excellence..........A.M.
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James Inman
Date: 8/11/2015 7:34:00 AM
Thanks AM, nice to hear from you.
Date: 8/10/2015 3:51:00 PM
I see this was inspired by Broken Wings herself which I was wondering about!! It's got gorgeous formatting. Love the way the bottom looks like the wings broken in two. An ambitious and beautiful write!!
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James Inman
Date: 8/10/2015 4:36:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I'm happy to say BW seems to like.
Date: 8/10/2015 1:48:00 PM
James this is so beautiful not just the words but with your heart and soul dripping from each sweet word , I am deeplymoved with this awesome write 7+++++ and of course it goes to my favorites
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James Inman
Date: 8/10/2015 2:09:00 PM
Inspired by you. Would not have been written without your wonderful poems.