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Her Bedroom Wall

Her little grandson asked about the “funny-looking picture” on her bedroom wall. “Who’s Willie John?” She said, “He was without a doubt the finest man I’ve ever known. He was my grandpa, so he’d be your great-great grandpa.” Wide-eyed, he said, “Wow! How come you’ve never shown me where he lives or let me meet him? Take me to him, Grandma. Please!’ She smiled and set him on her knees, held back her tears, and said, “My sweet dear child, Grandpa’s in Heaven now.” “How long’s he been up there?” he said. “For forty years. Now off to bed!” When time was right, she’d tell him how a “funny-looking” piece of art, the gravestone rubbing she had made, became a treasure she’d not trade for gold. Its presence thrilled her heart, just like her thoughts of Grandpa, who had raised her when her parents died. She reminisced—Oh, how he’d tried to please her! There were very few bad times. She knew he’d always taught her right. She then recalled the day she’d wandered till she found her way to the old graveyard that she sought and Grandpa’s grave—a shocking sight! She pulled away the vines that clung and cried with guilt as each she flung off to the side with all her might. She vowed, “This grave will no more be neglected.” Then she used her skills to make the precious piece that fills the frame high on her bedroom wall. entered in Geraldine Taylor's Creative Collective Anthology Series on July 10, 2017

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Date: 10/14/2016 2:58:00 PM
Great story told in poetic verse..I enjoyed reading your contest winner..Congrats..Sara
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/14/2016 4:41:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara! Janice
Date: 10/10/2016 10:08:00 AM
Janice, congratulations on your win in my contest, with this very touching poem ~
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/14/2016 4:43:00 PM
Constance, thank you so much for sponsoring the contest and for placing my poem! Janice
Date: 10/9/2016 11:26:00 AM
Janice-a wonderful tale told here, loved this one...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/9/2016 12:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Luloo! Janice
Date: 10/8/2016 3:31:00 PM
Hi Janice, You penned such a touching story. It felt as though I was reading a book. Well done. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/8/2016 3:47:00 PM
Alexis, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 10/4/2016 3:17:00 PM
this is a unique story for the contest, Janice. Mine is fictional. is yours too? Or is there really a wonderful grandfather like this in your family? very nicely done.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/4/2016 4:23:00 PM
Thanks for your comment, Andrea! It's fictional. Janice
Date: 10/4/2016 9:08:00 AM
such a unique take on the theme, janice... subtly sullen and beautifully rendered... thanks for my placement in your last contest.. huggs
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/4/2016 1:25:00 PM
Thanks so much, Nette. And you're welcome! Janice
Date: 10/3/2016 5:10:00 PM
What a fabulous take on the picture prompt Janice you told a wonderful tale:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/3/2016 5:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! Janice
Date: 10/3/2016 4:22:00 PM
I'm sure this is fictional, but for some reason the living just don't make time for the dead. It is tragic but it is also reality. A very sad story but a happy ending. Good luck!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 10/4/2016 1:27:00 PM
Daniel, thanks so much for your comment. Janice
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2016 5:13:00 PM
Great comment Daniel - and it is for that reason I do not want any form of memorial - am being scattered at a place I love and that will be it:-) hugs Jan xx

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