Helpless (Tanka)
HELPLESS (Tanka)
i can’t help myself
she just smiled and threw a kiss
knees are growing weak
i can’t help stumbling forward
lips form words but not a sound
what a fool I am
i am breathless stuttering
she patiently waits
i had planned so carefully
but now I fear all is lost
yes! I am a fool!
the kiss? I thought she meant me
but there is this guy
she smiles and looks right past me
they embrace I crawl away
Copyright © Daver Austin | Year Posted 2010
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