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Help Me Be More Me

i. try to sabotage me by limiting me it will serve to inspire me to better my best to amaze myself ii. box me up cage me and take away the food i will live on meditation and oil it will be a journey i can relish iii. deflect me and reject me i will not notice allowing no one to steal a single ounce of my soul or my determination iv. toss me into a canyon filled with wild hungry wolves i will tame them and we will return to show you what you have helped to create.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 4/7/2020 9:30:00 PM

Caren, I absolutely love the willful spirit and artistic expression of your potent poem. Your golden pen spills mighty ink in this creative superb piece of self-empowerment. The last stanza is especially impressive! A fav! Warmest wishes always, dear poetess.. ~Susan

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/8/2020 7:41:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear Susan; this is indeed wonderful praise as your poetry is MAGNIFICO my dear friend! I am cherishing this comment always.

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 4/7/2020 8:33:00 AM

We all should have this determination! Another one of your fine poems, Karen. / M

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/7/2020 8:52:00 PM

Thank you Maurice.