Senryu- Help Stop

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car stuck in snow- stop it just keeps coming down- stop bring big shovel- stop _______________________ February 17, 2016 Poetry/Senryu/Telegram/help stop Copyright Protected, ID 16-758-626-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/18/2016 3:45:00 PM

Ah another morse code senryu! Coming soon-stop....my car stuck too-stop....we need help-stop:)) ~ Enjoyed, Constance:) // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 2/18/2016 5:40:00 PM

51cms...that would be 20 inches of snow! Never snows in Malta...I don't know if that's good or bad!

Constance La France
Date: 2/18/2016 5:13:00 PM

Paul, we got an epic snowstorm here in Ottawa Canada on Tuesday, 51 centemeters of snow, not sure what that is in inches, but a lot, 7 foot snow drifts, we are digging out still stop

Thomas Martin

Date: 2/17/2016 1:12:00 PM

ROFL. Again wonderful use of telegram style in this senryu! Greatest compliment--Envy!

Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2016 2:53:00 PM

Thomas, thanks for visiting with the wonderful, we just had an epic snow storm here, 51 centimeters of snow, not sure what that is in inches, but it was as much snow that we get in a month in one day, we are still digging out, cars are buried, people stranded, traffic at a standstill, no buses, but I was all cuddly in my nest with the kitties in front of the fireplace ~

Tim Smith

Date: 2/17/2016 9:23:00 AM

A true story three years ago I was stuck in a blizzard. The road was impassable with drifts over three feet tall. Luckily an old farmer had his grandson clear a path, for me and 8 other stranded cars, in his Bobcat. It took two hours to go 1/4 mile to the next gas station where we waited it out another 12 hours. I swear I could write a book on the cast of characters that were stranded with me. Excellent write.

Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2016 9:34:00 AM

Tim, thanks for visiting and the excellent, and the story, would make a good one for sure, we just had a huge snow storm here with drifts over 7 feet tall, and cars buried, 51 centemeters, not sure how many inches that works out to, no transportation like buses, people stranded, it was horrible, tons of accidents my windows are snow covered 3/4 up but thankfully now it is over, stop