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This is a thank you to my friends Carol and Uwe who have picked me up many times. I cherish your friendship.

Stand tall Don't fall Look high Blue sky Can't fly? Why try? Glance down Don't drown Pretty lake So fake World crazed All mazed So wrong Too long Time fast Can't last Keep pace Cliff face Little stumble Huge tumble Won't listen Eyes glisten Tears fall Brain pall I hurt In dirt Must try Reach sky Good friend Downward bend Helping hand I stand My heart Fresh start Begin anew Thank you

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Date: 3/22/2024 10:36:00 PM
Thanks Aly We appreciate this collusion of couplets dedicated to us. Lots of love and peace to you and your household.
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Aly Bahr
Date: 3/23/2024 12:20:00 AM
You and Carol have helped me so much. You have listened to me rant and rave and you have never been judgemental. I couldn't ask for better friends.
Date: 9/27/2023 8:14:00 PM
There will always be friends to help you, for they love you even for your flaws. - Phoenix :)
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Aly Bahr
Date: 2/25/2024 5:33:00 PM
And I cherish your love my sweet.
Date: 9/27/2023 3:18:00 PM
Original and hopeful!
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Aly Bahr
Date: 9/27/2023 7:57:00 PM
Thank you so much Karen Jones.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things