Hellsnow Minnesota

It's getting cold again
I wasted a good long year
Just hiding my dark parts from my light parts
And hearing my grey parts tear me a-part
I told my friends I was just loosing sleep
After my dad stop speaking to me
It's snowing again
In Minnesota
In Moorhead
In Waubun
Iced trees all along Hwy113
But my hands are getting hotter
While the rest of me goes cold
I quit this habit, I quit this habit, I QUIT THIS HABIT!
I've gripped my share of ice, I've tired my kind distractions
But still they're hot and burn themselves to burn me up
Every time I am reminded by everyone I know
I failed, and whole year in the tubes
I failed, and my hands left cold straight fine silver burns
The kind of brands you can easily find
Walmart
The hardware store
Art stores
Kitchen drawer
I quit this habit, I quit this habit, I QUITE THIS HABIT!
But that doesn't mean a thing
My stripes aren't gonna wash away
I can yell all I want at the mirror
But the snow drops in my yard still grow red
'Cause in all of Minnesota I know
There's a place inside me when things get cold
And my hands burn
In HellSnow Minnesota
Where love is unrequited and I fail at all my work
And long sleeves save my life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Souders Avatar
May 10, 2009 at 7:24 PM
wow this is a great poem, I read it over and over , love the style and progression. ,,Johnathon
Winter Avatar
September 11, 2008 at 1:16 PM
You sound so very hard on yourself. We all make mistakes. Is it possible you could use some outside help (couldn't we all?)? This was upsetting to read as you make yourself out as a failure, and what you quit, or tried to, seems common and there is help. There is beauty and good in you. There is in everyone. You just wrote your heart out. If you've been hiding from the truth, I guess it has to come out some way. My heart goes out to you. Good luck and keep writing. Love, Shar
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