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Like the Appalaician mountains that span high into the sky. I don't want to do these dishes, none of them are mine. Baking sheets, frying pans, infinite cups and bowls. Caked on meat, wrinkled hands, A clean kitchen is my goal....... Jared Pickett 1/22/2010 Asavvy1

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Date: 3/8/2010 7:42:00 AM
A clean Kitchen you shall have:)..In my country we use'Mastro lindo" and "Jif":)..but first..dinner time:)lol..Charma
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Date: 2/25/2010 8:36:00 AM
I hope the meal was worth it's mountain! :)
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Date: 2/23/2010 6:20:00 PM
GEE You sound like my son who ..MAKES a mountin out of nothing..Boy he hates them dishes..Enjoyed reading your poem tonight. MAKE them dishes look like fun..IRMA
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Date: 2/20/2010 4:53:00 PM
I HAVE HAD NIGHTS LIKE THIS, WAKING UP IN THE WRONG KITCHEN. Like your poem and your imagination. Well done. MAC
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Date: 1/24/2010 12:02:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today JP Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/23/2010 10:03:00 AM
Wow... this flowed so smoothly.. enjoyed the rythem of it all. Have great weekend! :)
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Date: 1/23/2010 9:03:00 AM
Dang Jared! After I read and commented on your poem.. I got ta feelin guilty and had to go and do my dishes! Unheard of! :)-Robert
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Date: 1/23/2010 8:19:00 AM
haha Great free verse, Jared. There were times when I was single and actually had money that I would throw them all out and start over with new ones! Now that's bad. Thanks for the reality check, my friend. soup mail in a few.
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Date: 1/22/2010 11:58:00 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today JP.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/22/2010 7:11:00 AM
SOUP MAIL... REPLY TO ...
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Date: 1/22/2010 4:46:00 AM
I need to clean my kitchen, awesome write my friend. I need hang this one somewhere in the kitchen! LOL!
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Date: 1/21/2010 7:29:00 PM
Sounds like a manly man's kitchent too... but your poem is authentic and lov luv luv your title.... feedback please... did your friends like the comments from the poets who read their work?? luv.. "Sweetie"
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Date: 1/21/2010 6:51:00 PM
Great work Jared, a great goal for to end the night...Raul
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Date: 1/21/2010 4:49:00 PM
And those wrinkled hands probably made someone else's life a lot easier. I really like the depth in this poem. One can take a life's message away from your words. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 1/21/2010 2:50:00 PM
You had me laughing on this one, Jared. I love your implied comparison to the Appalachian mountains and the stack of dishes!!! This is too funny! Keep the funny thoughts coming! I love a good laugh... Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/21/2010 12:36:00 PM
Hey, I like this, Jared! Yeah, I certainly can relate!!! andrea
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Date: 1/21/2010 11:40:00 AM
funny, seems I have that same delima every night. oh well-if you eat there is a price to pay.
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Date: 1/21/2010 11:34:00 AM
Get into that kitchen and rattle them pots and pans!!!!!! Cute!!!Marty
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Date: 1/21/2010 11:22:00 AM
Your style stands out with charm and creativity. "Mountains and sky portend a task well- done. Thanks. Jan
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