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HELLO BUTTERFLY

hello hello butterfly flutterby epitome of symmetry graceful & elegant modest & innocent whispering hues & color spreading loving cheer a breath sweet kiss a bit of bliss
Published in my 24-page photo/anthology book ~HELLO BUTTERFLY~ 2020 AP: 2nd place 2022, 2nd place 2020, 3rd place 2020 POTD October 2, 2019 Submitted on October 1, 2019 for contest Writing Challenge, October - Butterfly sponsored by DEAR HEART- WIISHKOBE ODE - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 8/27/2021 7:13:00 PM
This is just so much fun..OH I love it. I want to put it on my refrigerator, to always look at and read it when I am there. It's just so cool, so interesting, so much fun, so pretty! I'm so glad I found it surfing around.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/28/2021 2:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Marikate ~
Date: 5/17/2021 3:01:00 PM
I came upon this one in list of your "best" poems and I can see why!! Lovely, Line.
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Date: 5/17/2021 7:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea ~
Date: 2/15/2021 10:42:00 PM
Great poem, simple and yet complex at the same time; just like a butterfly. Great work, its position in the top 100 poems well deserved :) ...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/16/2021 8:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, Clive. Most appreciated ~
Date: 1/26/2021 8:20:00 AM
Line, I miss these days of flitting flutterby fun; poetry in innocence. -Richard
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/26/2021 10:59:00 AM
LOL ~ thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Richard
Date: 8/16/2020 7:26:00 PM
Just checking the all time top 100 list and there this poem appeared, this is a quality write Line and the design of a butterfly in writing well, is special. Congrats on all the accolades with more to come!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/16/2020 7:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, John. Most appreciated~
Date: 6/19/2020 11:35:00 PM
back with congrats placing in the top 100 best poems!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/20/2020 2:09:00 PM
Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/16/2020 6:50:00 PM
I see this is your number one poem in your best poems list. It's so lovely!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/17/2020 6:55:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrea.
Date: 2/6/2020 2:47:00 PM
How perfectly lovely. Graceful & sweet.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/6/2020 11:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jean.
Date: 1/7/2020 7:12:00 AM
Understand the hard work to present. Very well done. Congratulation.... God bless you.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/7/2020 7:59:00 AM
Thanks, Pratap. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/30/2019 1:23:00 PM
Hello Lin Gauthier, that form must have been hard to type. Anyway it is a beautiful poem. I enjoyed it. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 12/26/2019 10:21:00 AM
I remember this poem Line. A beautiful butterfly of a poem and so deserving on making the top 100.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/26/2019 9:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/16/2019 8:46:00 PM
Amazing piece. Congrats on your win.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/17/2019 12:14:00 AM
Thank you, Franci. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/20/2019 6:06:00 AM
oh very clever and well crafted
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/20/2019 8:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Stephen. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/29/2019 5:56:00 PM
I, as an appreciator of nature and admirer of the beautiful beings that dwell within, certainly did appreciate your shapely poem in tribute to a fluttering butterfly.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/29/2019 8:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janet. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/28/2019 4:15:00 PM
Not only does this paint a perfect picture, but the words are so elegant. Absolutely lovely! A new fav!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/28/2019 4:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Anna. Most appreciated.
Date: 10/25/2019 11:59:00 AM
Very creative, I loved it. I miss butterflies, rarely see them in my neighborhood. I did a poem about that. - "We killed all the butterflies"
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/25/2019 3:22:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Michelo. I hardly saw any butterflies this summer, I saw a few more this fall. I will check out your poem.
Date: 10/24/2019 10:22:00 AM
clever and nice, thank you.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/24/2019 2:15:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/21/2019 3:24:00 AM
oh! Nice. Wish to have good day ahead sir.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/21/2019 3:34:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sanjay.
Date: 10/14/2019 10:04:00 PM
Another stunning example of your poetic and visual talents, Line. Beautiful poetry! Belated congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with both your contest win and with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/14/2019 10:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Date: 10/12/2019 10:47:00 AM
Line - this is wonderful and beautifully written! DHolmes
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/12/2019 6:49:00 PM
Thank you, David. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/8/2019 7:20:00 PM
Line congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem and congratulations on your POTD !
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/8/2019 8:10:00 PM
Thanks, Constance, for your most appreciated compliment. Thanks for the inspirational challenge.
Date: 10/7/2019 10:48:00 AM
Beautiful!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/7/2019 12:57:00 PM
Thanks, Joshua. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/7/2019 9:52:00 AM
Great poem line. Love the image. Congrats.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/7/2019 12:57:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/7/2019 8:21:00 AM
Line, Congratulations on your win.Love the poem.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/7/2019 12:56:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/6/2019 1:33:00 PM
Line, Though the poem type is called Concrete, there is a floating charm that flies (aptly described by Maureen) in your poem HELLO BUTTERFLY. Congratulations on your win..though your write is all the prize ever needed. -Richard
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Date: 10/6/2019 2:15:00 PM
Yes. I chuckled when I selected CONCRETE as the form. Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment.
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