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Hello Butterfly

hello                      hello
butterfly                     flutterby
epitome        of      symmetry
graceful     &      elegant
modest    &  innocent
whispering
hues  &  color
 spreading     loving cheer
a breath          sweet kiss     
a bit                of bliss



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology book ~HELLO BUTTERFLY~ 2020

AP: 2nd place 2022, 2nd place 2020, 3rd place 2020

POTD October 2, 2019  

Submitted on October 1, 2019 for contest Writing Challenge, October - Butterfly sponsored by DEAR HEART- WIISHKOBE ODE  -  RANKED 1ST

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Marikate Kingston Date: 8/27/2021 7:13:00 PM This is just so much fun..OH I love it. I want to put it on my refrigerator, to always look at and read it when I am there. It's just so cool, so interesting, so much fun, so pretty! I'm so glad I found it surfing around. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 8/28/2021 2:01:00 PM Thank you so much, Marikate ~

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/17/2021 3:01:00 PM I came upon this one in list of your "best" poems and I can see why!! Lovely, Line. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/17/2021 7:00:00 PM Thank you very much, Andrea ~

Clive Blake Date: 2/15/2021 10:42:00 PM Great poem, simple and yet complex at the same time; just like a butterfly. Great work, its position in the top 100 poems well deserved :) ... Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 2/16/2021 8:36:00 AM Thank you so much, Clive. Most appreciated ~

Quoth Theraven Date: 1/26/2021 8:20:00 AM Line, I miss these days of flitting flutterby fun; poetry in innocence. -Richard Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/26/2021 10:59:00 AM LOL ~ thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Richard

John Hamilton Date: 8/16/2020 7:26:00 PM Just checking the all time top 100 list and there this poem appeared, this is a quality write Line and the design of a butterfly in writing well, is special. Congrats on all the accolades with more to come! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 8/16/2020 7:57:00 PM Thank you so much, John. Most appreciated~

Timothy Mcguire Date: 6/19/2020 11:35:00 PM back with congrats placing in the top 100 best poems! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 6/20/2020 2:09:00 PM Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/16/2020 6:50:00 PM I see this is your number one poem in your best poems list. It's so lovely! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 4/17/2020 6:55:00 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrea.

Jean Bush Date: 2/6/2020 2:47:00 PM How perfectly lovely. Graceful & sweet. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 2/6/2020 11:27:00 PM Thank you so much, Jean.

Pratap Roy Date: 1/7/2020 7:12:00 AM Understand the hard work to present. Very well done. Congratulation.... God bless you. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 1/7/2020 7:59:00 AM Thanks, Pratap. Most appreciated.

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 12/30/2019 1:23:00 PM Hello Lin Gauthier, that form must have been hard to type. Anyway it is a beautiful poem. I enjoyed it. Have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply

Charlie Knowlton Date: 12/26/2019 10:21:00 AM I remember this poem Line. A beautiful butterfly of a poem and so deserving on making the top 100. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 12/26/2019 9:56:00 PM Thank you so much, Charlie. Most appreciated.

Franci Hoffman Date: 12/16/2019 8:46:00 PM Amazing piece. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 12/17/2019 12:14:00 AM Thank you, Franci. Most appreciated.

Stephen Pennell Date: 11/20/2019 6:06:00 AM oh very clever and well crafted Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 11/20/2019 8:23:00 AM Thank you so much, Stephen. Much appreciated.

Janet Grace Date: 10/29/2019 5:56:00 PM I, as an appreciator of nature and admirer of the beautiful beings that dwell within, certainly did appreciate your shapely poem in tribute to a fluttering butterfly. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/29/2019 8:25:00 PM Thank you so much, Janet. Much appreciated.

Anna Hopper Date: 10/28/2019 4:15:00 PM Not only does this paint a perfect picture, but the words are so elegant. Absolutely lovely! A new fav! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/28/2019 4:26:00 PM Thank you so much Anna. Most appreciated.

Michelo Mweetwa Date: 10/25/2019 11:59:00 AM Very creative, I loved it. I miss butterflies, rarely see them in my neighborhood. I did a poem about that. - "We killed all the butterflies" Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/25/2019 3:22:00 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Michelo. I hardly saw any butterflies this summer, I saw a few more this fall. I will check out your poem.

Linda Milgate Date: 10/24/2019 10:22:00 AM clever and nice, thank you. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/24/2019 2:15:00 PM Thank you, Linda. Much appreciated.

Sanjay Karmakar Date: 10/21/2019 3:24:00 AM oh! Nice. Wish to have good day ahead sir. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/21/2019 3:34:00 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sanjay.

Susan Ashley Date: 10/14/2019 10:04:00 PM Another stunning example of your poetic and visual talents, Line. Beautiful poetry! Belated congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with both your contest win and with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/14/2019 10:14:00 PM Thank you so much, Susan, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.

David Holmes Date: 10/12/2019 10:47:00 AM Line - this is wonderful and beautifully written! DHolmes Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/12/2019 6:49:00 PM Thank you, David. Much appreciated.

Constance La France Date: 10/8/2019 7:20:00 PM Line congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem and congratulations on your POTD ! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/8/2019 8:10:00 PM Thanks, Constance, for your most appreciated compliment. Thanks for the inspirational challenge.

Joshua Ryngksai Date: 10/7/2019 10:48:00 AM Beautiful! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/7/2019 12:57:00 PM Thanks, Joshua. Much appreciated.

Charlie Knowlton Date: 10/7/2019 9:52:00 AM Great poem line. Love the image. Congrats. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/7/2019 12:57:00 PM Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.

Charlie Way Date: 10/7/2019 8:21:00 AM Line, Congratulations on your win.Love the poem. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/7/2019 12:56:00 PM Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.

Quoth Theraven Date: 10/6/2019 1:33:00 PM Line, Though the poem type is called Concrete, there is a floating charm that flies (aptly described by Maureen) in your poem HELLO BUTTERFLY. Congratulations on your win..though your write is all the prize ever needed. -Richard Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/6/2019 2:15:00 PM Yes. I chuckled when I selected CONCRETE as the form. Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment.

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