Line Gauthier Poet Concrete

Hello Butterfly

hello                      hello
butterfly                     flutterby
epitome        of      symmetry
graceful     &      elegant
modest    &  innocent
whispering
hues  &  color
 spreading     loving cheer
a breath          sweet kiss     
a bit                of bliss



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology book ~HELLO BUTTERFLY~ 2020

AP: 2nd place 2022, 2nd place 2020, 3rd place 2020

POTD October 2, 2019  

Submitted on October 1, 2019 for contest Writing Challenge, October - Butterfly sponsored by DEAR HEART- WIISHKOBE ODE  -  RANKED 1ST

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Marikate Kingston August 27, 2021 at 7:13 PM This is just so much fun..OH I love it. I want to put it on my refrigerator, to always look at and read it when I am there. It's just so cool, so interesting, so much fun, so pretty! I'm so glad I found it surfing around. Line Gauthier August 28, 2021 at 2:01 PM Thank you so much, Marikate ~

Andrea Dietrich May 17, 2021 at 3:01 PM I came upon this one in list of your "best" poems and I can see why!! Lovely, Line. Line Gauthier May 17, 2021 at 7:00 PM Thank you very much, Andrea ~

Clive Blake February 15, 2021 at 10:42 PM Great poem, simple and yet complex at the same time; just like a butterfly. Great work, its position in the top 100 poems well deserved :) ... Line Gauthier February 16, 2021 at 8:36 AM Thank you so much, Clive. Most appreciated ~

Quoth Theraven January 26, 2021 at 8:20 AM Line, I miss these days of flitting flutterby fun; poetry in innocence. -Richard Line Gauthier January 26, 2021 at 10:59 AM LOL ~ thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Richard

John Hamilton August 16, 2020 at 7:26 PM Just checking the all time top 100 list and there this poem appeared, this is a quality write Line and the design of a butterfly in writing well, is special. Congrats on all the accolades with more to come! Line Gauthier August 16, 2020 at 7:57 PM Thank you so much, John. Most appreciated~

Timothy Mcguire June 19, 2020 at 11:35 PM back with congrats placing in the top 100 best poems! Line Gauthier June 20, 2020 at 2:09 PM Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich April 16, 2020 at 6:50 PM I see this is your number one poem in your best poems list. It's so lovely! Line Gauthier April 17, 2020 at 6:55 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrea.

Jean Bush February 6, 2020 at 2:47 PM How perfectly lovely. Graceful & sweet. Line Gauthier February 6, 2020 at 11:27 PM Thank you so much, Jean.

Pratap Roy January 7, 2020 at 7:12 AM Understand the hard work to present. Very well done. Congratulation.... God bless you. Line Gauthier January 7, 2020 at 7:59 AM Thanks, Pratap. Most appreciated.

Darlene De Beaulieu December 30, 2019 at 1:23 PM Hello Lin Gauthier, that form must have been hard to type. Anyway it is a beautiful poem. I enjoyed it. Have a nice day my friend.

Charlie Knowlton December 26, 2019 at 10:21 AM I remember this poem Line. A beautiful butterfly of a poem and so deserving on making the top 100. Line Gauthier December 26, 2019 at 9:56 PM Thank you so much, Charlie. Most appreciated.

Franci Hoffman December 16, 2019 at 8:46 PM Amazing piece. Congrats on your win. Line Gauthier December 17, 2019 at 12:14 AM Thank you, Franci. Most appreciated.

Stephen Pennell November 20, 2019 at 6:06 AM oh very clever and well crafted Line Gauthier November 20, 2019 at 8:23 AM Thank you so much, Stephen. Much appreciated.

Janet Grace October 29, 2019 at 5:56 PM I, as an appreciator of nature and admirer of the beautiful beings that dwell within, certainly did appreciate your shapely poem in tribute to a fluttering butterfly. Line Gauthier October 29, 2019 at 8:25 PM Thank you so much, Janet. Much appreciated.

Anna Hopper October 28, 2019 at 4:15 PM Not only does this paint a perfect picture, but the words are so elegant. Absolutely lovely! A new fav! Line Gauthier October 28, 2019 at 4:26 PM Thank you so much Anna. Most appreciated.

Michelo Mweetwa October 25, 2019 at 11:59 AM Very creative, I loved it. I miss butterflies, rarely see them in my neighborhood. I did a poem about that. - "We killed all the butterflies" Line Gauthier October 25, 2019 at 3:22 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Michelo. I hardly saw any butterflies this summer, I saw a few more this fall. I will check out your poem.

Linda Milgate October 24, 2019 at 10:22 AM clever and nice, thank you. Line Gauthier October 24, 2019 at 2:15 PM Thank you, Linda. Much appreciated.

Sanjay Karmakar October 21, 2019 at 3:24 AM oh! Nice. Wish to have good day ahead sir. Line Gauthier October 21, 2019 at 3:34 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sanjay.

Susan Ashley October 14, 2019 at 10:04 PM Another stunning example of your poetic and visual talents, Line. Beautiful poetry! Belated congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with both your contest win and with POTD honors. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Line Gauthier October 14, 2019 at 10:14 PM Thank you so much, Susan, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.

David Holmes October 12, 2019 at 10:47 AM Line - this is wonderful and beautifully written! DHolmes Line Gauthier October 12, 2019 at 6:49 PM Thank you, David. Much appreciated.

Constance La France October 8, 2019 at 7:20 PM Line congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem and congratulations on your POTD ! Line Gauthier October 8, 2019 at 8:10 PM Thanks, Constance, for your most appreciated compliment. Thanks for the inspirational challenge.

Joshua Ryngksai October 7, 2019 at 10:48 AM Beautiful! Line Gauthier October 7, 2019 at 12:57 PM Thanks, Joshua. Much appreciated.

Charlie Knowlton October 7, 2019 at 9:52 AM Great poem line. Love the image. Congrats. Line Gauthier October 7, 2019 at 12:57 PM Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.

Charlie Way October 7, 2019 at 8:21 AM Line, Congratulations on your win.Love the poem. Line Gauthier October 7, 2019 at 12:56 PM Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.

Quoth Theraven October 6, 2019 at 1:33 PM Line, Though the poem type is called Concrete, there is a floating charm that flies (aptly described by Maureen) in your poem HELLO BUTTERFLY. Congratulations on your win..though your write is all the prize ever needed. -Richard Line Gauthier October 6, 2019 at 2:15 PM Yes. I chuckled when I selected CONCRETE as the form. Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment.

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