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Heavy Hearted

A cloudy sky looms With threat of rain today, And our American flag Is being shredded By the fierce winds That constantly blow, A reminder of our soldiers And how they too Are being shredded in this War that no one wants. Safe and warm within My little castle on the hill I can’t help but think How cold winter will become; That chill to the bone They will feel washes over me As compassion for their Bearing up stabs my heart. As each tour ends another One begins, with funerals To attend and more young Soldiers laid to rest with cold Medals of honor and folded flags That will wave no more. The rain is here and like my tears, Comes in sudden bursts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/11/2017 4:56:00 PM
It's a very grey rainy day here so I thought to visit some of your poems from the beginning..You are one of my all time favourites Connie :-) This is such an incredibly poignant piece with wonderful emotion and heartfelt words for soldiers. I am drawn to soldiers, what they sacrifice at such a young age and the courage they show, is so astounding, I am humbled by them.Our complaints of 'first world problems..nonsense in the big picture. Lovely writing, a fave, 7+++ many blessings to you :-) lynn
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Date: 7/19/2022 7:45:00 PM
You are so kind Lynn. I was checking through my poems and saw I never thanked you for honoring my poem with a fave and such a lovely comment. It warms my heart. My granddaughter was born March 2nd and I am sure I was busy with her at this time. Thank you so much. Blessings xxoo
Date: 2/3/2012 10:54:00 AM
Just revisiting this one, one of your first posts here. It was such a thoughtful one that shows your great compassion for our soldiers. Isn't it wonderful that so many of them are finally coming home! Today I plan to see TWO movies back to back: the one with GRAY in the title(a drama about people dying in the Arctic) and Woman in Black!! I will leave after doing my morning comments. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/7/2010 9:45:00 AM
Congrats on being featured. Also thank you. As a vet who served during Desert Storm, it's always nice to see people give a little salute to our military. Great poem. Tony
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Date: 5/3/2010 7:07:00 PM
Aloha Connie, and congratulations on your worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:25:00 PM
Congrats Connie on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an excellent choice to feature and share with us all.. with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/3/2010 9:27:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/3/2010 4:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Connie. Love,Carol
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Date: 1/2/2010 11:18:00 PM
HI, connie. One of your very tender and caring poems here which says so much and so much about you too. Go to soup mail and I will write you something from there! Luv, Andrea
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