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Heavy Heart - One Liner

That which is ill-begot will love you not, but pull the strings of a heavy heart. ... CayCay December 3, 2015

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James Inman

Date: 12/8/2015 11:21:00 AM

Wise words CayCay. Well thought out.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/20/2015 5:44:00 AM

Hey, James - I thank you. Merry Everything! CayCay

Mark Woods

Date: 12/6/2015 1:12:00 AM

A wonderful line that could bet the start to a magnificent poem. : )

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/6/2015 11:47:00 PM

Thank you. I never told you that I like your new pic - well, it was new when I first liked it. Be good to yourself ... CayCay

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/5/2015 10:01:00 PM

Well said, CayCay! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/6/2015 11:48:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim ... CayCay

Michael Tor

Date: 12/5/2015 6:57:00 PM

Wise words CayCay congratulations on your win!!

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/6/2015 11:48:00 PM

Thank you, my friend. All the best to you and your pen ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2015 6:37:00 PM

wow, I really like yours, sweetie!!! Big congrats.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/6/2015 11:49:00 PM

That makes me happy - thanks for telling me ... CayCay

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/5/2015 5:45:00 PM

Congratulations CayCay.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/6/2015 11:49:00 PM

Nayda - Hi! You are so sweet to offer your congratulations - thank you ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2015 12:09:00 PM

Congrats on your win CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/6/2015 11:50:00 PM

I'm hugging you back ... CayCay

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2015 11:21:00 AM

CayCay.....Lovely win.... Love Skat

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/6/2015 11:50:00 PM

It is lovely of you to say so - thank you ... CayCay

John Lawless

Date: 12/5/2015 11:14:00 AM

Nicely done CayCay...congrats

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/6/2015 11:51:00 PM

Thank you, John ... CayCay

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/5/2015 10:28:00 AM

Love it Cay Cay! Congrats!

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/6/2015 11:51:00 PM

I'm delighted you told me. Thank you ... CayCay

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/5/2015 8:58:00 AM

Amazing one-liner, CayCay! So very true. Congratulations on your fine win. 7, Hugs, Sandra

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/6/2015 11:52:00 PM

Hey, my favorite Sandra, for the comments and the 7 and for all you share ... CayCay

Eve Roper

Date: 12/5/2015 8:34:00 AM

Great one line! Congratulations on your win!

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/6/2015 11:52:00 PM

Eve - I am so glad you like it. Thank you ... CayCay

Paul Callus

Date: 12/5/2015 8:22:00 AM

A great one-liner, CayCay! A troubled conscience never rests. I see from the comments below that this is a winning entry, so congratulations!:) Regards // paul

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/6/2015 11:53:00 PM

I am delighted that you liked it, Paul. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Are the best ... CayCay

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/5/2015 7:48:00 AM

CayCay, true words indeed. Congratulations on your fine win it was deserved:-) Alexis

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/6/2015 11:58:00 PM

I sure appreciate your sweet comment. Thank you, Alexis ... CayCay

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/5/2015 7:37:00 AM

Wonderful one liner, grats on your win.

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/6/2015 11:58:00 PM

Casarah - your comment is most sweet and appreciated ... CayCay

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/5/2015 12:23:00 AM

Ok, I am very impressed by all the one liners I have read, but this, well this is brilliant! A7

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/5/2015 1:13:00 AM

It was an awesome thrill to find your comment. I guess any writer would be elated to read such rewarding words. I thank you, Arthur. All the best ... CayCay

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/4/2015 5:39:00 PM

karmic and introspective... superbly done, cay.. huggs

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/4/2015 5:50:00 PM

Hey, Sweetie. Such a great comment - many thanks ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 12/4/2015 3:11:00 PM

oh so true CayCay good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/4/2015 5:51:00 PM

Thinking about you weathering the weather - my thoughts are truly with you. Thank you, Jan, for commenting ... CayCay