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Heaven's Sigh - Hiku - 3 Hikus

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sun bleeds through falling on oaks and birch rich details awakened ~ winds bruise the sky blowing silence, grace laughing through sunlight ~ rain whispers on hearts dancing hope, lingering on clear, cool rivers Hiku (Disciplined Brevity) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula November 16, 2021

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Paul Callus

Date: 12/2/2021 1:57:00 AM

Your lovely descriptive powers are most noteworthy, Gina! I like the title, too. ~ Congratulations on your fine win. Blessings // paul

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/1/2021 7:39:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me sigh for heaven. God bless you.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/1/2021 5:52:00 PM

Dearest Gina, the beauty of Nature flows through your inspired pen to thrill both the poetic page and my heart’s imagination. Your exquisite imagery makes me sigh in a heavenly way. Congratulations for your excellent win in William’s contest. Warmest wishes, love and hugs, my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2021 3:34:00 PM

glad to see these gems made the winner list. Congrats!

Constance La France

Date: 12/1/2021 2:30:00 PM

Gina, heavenly and congratulations on your win in William's Hiku contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Jan Allison

Date: 12/1/2021 12:38:00 PM

Wonderful imagery and personification, many congratulations on your win Regina, hugs jan xx

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/1/2021 10:53:00 AM

Three wonderful executions, Gina! Agreeably satisfying verses that entertain the eyes, my friend! My compliments on your placement in the Hiku contest, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2021 3:33:00 PM

these are gorgeous!! Gotta check out the contest you have entered with them.

Karen Jones

Date: 11/16/2021 12:54:00 PM

Love this because it is so vivid and so beautiful. A fav. Good luck in the contest.

John Lawless

Date: 11/16/2021 9:54:00 AM

Beautifully done Regina...a bit of pointed personification.

Bill Baker

Date: 11/16/2021 7:24:00 AM

Love the personification of the elements in this unique triple Haiku. The description of the elements and their various forms of manification was sensually presented. Thank you for sharing you enormeous talent, Gina Hugs, Bill

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/16/2021 6:56:00 AM

Vividly descriptive and lovely, personification at its best, Gina! Janice