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Heaven's Gate

Before the dusk consumed the dark and gloomy day My soul had readied terrors for the night which lay Ahead, and promised tortuous hours of sleeplessness No rest would come; no peace, no happiness. The best of me was sleeping sound at heaven's gate Where years, perhaps, she planned to rest and wait Until a brighter morn I should leave this realm of fears And wash her golden hair with then my sweetest tears. Bright morn—a new day born—the sun appears anew Suggests a new attempt to find the peace I sought through Copious tears and deep despair, oh pity me, I say New start, new dreams, new hope, new plans today. Why despair o'er things I cannot alter in this life Best live in the sunshine and melt away the strife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/30/2020 4:37:00 AM
I like the conclusion very insightful. Sara
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/30/2020 5:06:00 AM
Thank you, Sara. I'm so happy you read my poem, and I'm equally delighted that you found the conclusion insightful. Again, thanks!
Date: 10/29/2020 2:37:00 AM
You have a fine rhyming scheme to your poetry, and it reads beautifully. glad I stopped by, Hoping to read more of your wonderful poetry, Welcome to poetry soup if your new.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/29/2020 7:45:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading some of my work. I appreciate it so much, and I hope you will come back from time to time to see what else I've put into verse. I love writing poetry!

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