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Poetry/Haibun/Heavenly Winter Forest
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1691-886-10
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, December 10, 2024
For the International Contest, Premiere V Open
Sponsor, Rob Carmack, Judged 12/22/2024

The Poetry of Exile—James Joyce, Rumi & Adrian Rice — Steemit

 

It is snowing in the forest and all is pure white and perfection. Except for tiny animal prints and my own. Some people call winter hell but I must call it heaven. I can hear the trees crackling, their branches laden with heavy snow. Icicles hang here and there like chandeliers. Soon, they will be dripping. Oh, so divine the scenes God has created. The fragile snowflakes so gentle, kissing my cheeks and lips. I can taste it. An icy stream still flows and the lovely wild horses are drinking. I must be quiet to not startle them. Moving away I walk in this forest that I know so well. There is an old tree that I always visit. It is twisted and gnarled, home to many a creature, with branches touching the ground in an odd way. Nature is so sublime. But, winter my favorite. the bird songs echo nature is speaking in sighs whispering snow falls

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Date: 12/10/2024 12:01:00 PM
Wonderful Haibun! Nature is speaking in sighs! Very cool read! Have a nice day ~ AA
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Date: 12/12/2024 2:55:00 PM
AA, thank you for the compliment, I love this form, blessings
Date: 12/10/2024 4:47:00 AM
You have painted a picture with words, just lovely. Thank you for sharing, kind regards, J x
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Date: 12/10/2024 8:05:00 AM
Jackie, thank you for the compliment~ Constance

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