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Heavenly Mother...

one day you were there the next you are in heaven God must have seen you struggling but now you live with God and Jesus in heaven when it rains i think of you in heaven crying cause it is sad you cant be here i love you mom your the best no one can replace you, never

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2010 1:18:00 PM

Lovely and heartfelt, congrats for placing in the contest with this, luv, andrea

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/11/2010 10:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Constance's Anything Goes Contest One Shain. Love,Carol

Colleen Bono

Date: 11/21/2009 7:36:00 PM

Nice tribute to your mother.I lost my mom 7 years ago and still think about her daily.Thanks for sharing your grief.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/13/2009 8:10:00 PM

Beautiful and touching, Shain, a great remembrance to all special Moms that have passed onto a better life... lost mine too.. left a big whole in my life.. no one can replace Mother.. Maybe u would like to read "Metamorphosis" or "A Mother's Ways" I wrote to tribute my Mom... great write... keep up the good work... luv.. Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart"

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/13/2009 12:19:00 PM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shain. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Sarah Johnson

Date: 11/13/2009 11:41:00 AM

buddy i feel your pain my step dad died and i felt like i just wanted to die i wanted to go back in time so many times to tal=ke his place i cut myself and everything so don't think your alone cuase your not lots of people lose thier loved ones to disease and wrecks and everything.

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/13/2009 10:48:00 AM

This is a heart breaker. I have been there with these same feelings....time passes, and it helps, but the pain never goes away. ~ Carrie