Heavenly Mother...

one day you
were there
the next you
are in heaven
God must have
seen you struggling
but now you
live with God
and Jesus
in heaven

when it rains
i think of you
in heaven
crying cause it
is sad you cant
be here

i love you mom
your the best
no one can
replace you, never
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 1:18 PM
Lovely and heartfelt, congrats for placing in the contest with this, luv, andrea
Brown Avatar
January 11, 2010 at 10:39 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's Anything Goes Contest One Shain. Love,Carol
Bono Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 7:36 PM
Nice tribute to your mother.I lost my mom 7 years ago and still think about her daily.Thanks for sharing your grief.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 13, 2009 at 8:10 PM
Beautiful and touching, Shain, a great remembrance to all special Moms that have passed onto a better life... lost mine too.. left a big whole in my life.. no one can replace Mother.. Maybe u would like to read "Metamorphosis" or "A Mother's Ways" I wrote to tribute my Mom... great write... keep up the good work... luv.. Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart"
Brown Avatar
November 13, 2009 at 12:19 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shain. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
November 13, 2009 at 11:41 AM
buddy i feel your pain my step dad died and i felt like i just wanted to die i wanted to go back in time so many times to tal=ke his place i cut myself and everything so don't think your alone cuase your not lots of people lose thier loved ones to disease and wrecks and everything.
Richards Avatar
November 13, 2009 at 10:48 AM
This is a heart breaker. I have been there with these same feelings....time passes, and it helps, but the pain never goes away. ~ Carrie
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