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Heavenly Dance

Shifting ever slightly swirling swaying every gently each note gathers more steam a strong penchant performing a heavenly dance in my unabated dream petals from roses cascade all around and we dance a heavenly dance your cheek cherished next to my blushed smile rose fingers touch your pastel gloves slip slowly unabated falling towards your feet tiptoes and pirouettes flashed lashes subtle smiles one beat one after another hearts dance close so close a heavenly dance twirls touches so fine the passion erupts eyes follow in time unabated petals fall notes go slow bridges crossed in a concert hall feelings lost in a moment in a dance an endless heavenly dance

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Date: 8/31/2016 10:03:00 AM
You never dissapoint. My computer and mouse have been on the blitz... Then I took up reading some of my old favorite books I saved... Reading them is as addictive as writing poetry! Hubby came to the computer rescue... again! He's my Hero... And you our undesputed romantic King of poetry... Computers are our salvation AND our bane! LOL... I should have kept Dragon a little further away from the computer... Computers and Dragon don't seem to mix... That fire thingie... you know...
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Date: 8/30/2016 7:27:00 AM
I love the imagery of a concert hall..the petals falling and notes going slow...Beautiful.
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/30/2016 12:39:00 PM
It is a romantic scene and I believe slow is better most times. Thanks for stopping by Charma
Date: 8/30/2016 2:04:00 AM
This lovely soothing poem had me dancing in a dream world. I loved it Tim! 7 ; )
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/30/2016 12:38:00 PM
Thanks Connie...I'm glad it got you dancing
Date: 8/29/2016 8:58:00 PM
I hear the soft melody of a piano in the background! Lovely!
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/30/2016 12:37:00 PM
Some good inspiration
Date: 8/29/2016 7:18:00 PM
A beautiful write, Tim! Your words paint a lovely, romantic scene. Blessings!
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/30/2016 12:37:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim
Date: 8/29/2016 6:39:00 PM
What a "loverly" picture you paint, Tim. Makes me want to put on some music and dance too.
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/30/2016 12:37:00 PM
The music by Ernesto is beautiful
Date: 8/29/2016 2:11:00 PM
I am dancing to the melody of your words Tim, so beautiful and romantic - a heavenly dance indeed:-) hugs jan xx 7
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/30/2016 12:36:00 PM
Thanks Jan. Happy you liked this one.

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