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The landscape of nightfall explodes with rosette vines, peeping through a collage of hues where gatherings of blooms dwell. Almost serene, I inhabit my soul ready to inhale the radiance of dusk: of how a world in my own inner terrain reflects the ceremonials of lilting grass... and how this ambrosial instance can transcend the lightness of space-- this unseen Hand painting the brushwork of lush fields cerulean and glowing mixed with holy water and the Self, that alone yet whole... heaven gifts me peace. Written 5/15/2019 for William Kekaula Epic Ethereal Editor Contest

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Date: 5/25/2019 6:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. Lovely.
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Date: 5/24/2019 7:03:00 PM
gorgeous poetry, Nette. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/24/2019 6:51:00 AM
My heartfelt thanks with no end, for your participation nette, CHEERS indeed for your placement in the Epic Ethereal Editor Contest, Aloha William Kekaula
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Date: 5/16/2019 3:42:00 PM
This poem brings peace to my spirit, Nette, such beautiful imagery. Best of luck. John
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Date: 5/16/2019 12:53:00 PM
Your poems are mysterious and charismatic, your imagery and creativity soars - Hugs my friend, Best wishes Jennifer.
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Date: 5/16/2019 7:35:00 AM
wow, love this - had to read it twice
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Date: 5/15/2019 11:39:00 PM
Written so lovely nette
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Date: 5/15/2019 10:16:00 PM
A treat awaits William! Serene splendor, nette! :) gw
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Date: 5/15/2019 4:50:00 PM
Splendid imagery ..heavenly write, Nette.
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Date: 5/15/2019 1:54:00 PM
A beautiful poem to read today. Very nice :)
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Date: 5/15/2019 1:31:00 PM
A real heavenly verse nette full of deep meaning which you write so well. Good luck Tom
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