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Heaven Sent

She arrived prematurely: she is exhausted and spent. And rests in quiet slumber, like an Angel heaven sent. Looking just like her mother: she beat the odds to survive. For it was a miracle: I thank God that she's alive. She's lying next to my wife, whose smile cannot be contained. But although she's overjoyed, she is physically strained. So, I cradle our baby lovingly within my arms. And open my heart up to her indisputable charms. Her chest heaves rhythmically within the embrace of sleep. And as I caress her hair, it's a struggle not to weep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Haight Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 1:05 PM
Beautiful and tender write, Emile. Congratulations on your awesome win. Sandra
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 8:46 AM
Thanks Sandra, I greatly appreciate your support. Emile.
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May 24, 2015 at 3:20 PM
Emile, Conrats on your awesome win @-> Always & Forever LINDA
Pinet Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 9:17 AM
Thanks Linda, I appreciate your continued support. Emile.
Oule Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 8:10 AM
Well empathized in this poem, I loved the theme of this and the images Well done and Congs brother on winning too
Pinet Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 10:53 AM
Thanks Bryan, I appreciate your support. Emile.
A  Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 7:07 PM
Emile, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! Forever *SKAT*
Pinet Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 7:46 AM
Thanks SKAT, I greatly appreciate your support. Emile.
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 1:55 PM
I was positive I commented on this Emile :-) Such beautiful tender imagery a joy to read. many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 2:32 PM
Thanks Jan, I greatly appreciate all of your support. Emile.
Meade Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 10:55 PM
Let the tears flow . . . for they give witness to the miracle of life . . . the washing of the birth and the breath of life! Well done my dear friend -- I celebrate this wonderful event. 7
Pinet Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 8:28 AM
Thanks so much David, I appreciate both your comment your support. Emile.
Das Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 10:22 PM
Adore this write. Sweet, tender love captures our heart. 7
Pinet Avatar
May 21, 2015 at 2:31 PM
Thanks Nandita, I appreciate your support. Emile.
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