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Heaven Sending Clear Signs of Hope's Return, Part Two

Heaven Sending Clear Signs Of Hope's Return (Sweet Hope Returns)(Part Two) Solitary ray of light breaks grey dawn's pain, flowing smoothly with emerging cool breeze. Am I dreaming or truly going insane? Is this apparition just another tease? Confidence grows as majestic sun breaks through, heaven sending clear signs of Hope's return. That precious moment dear, I thought only of you and just how once fiercely our great love did burn! Songbirds soon began chirping softest tunes. Life danced gaily through broad swaying trees. Then I pictured you dancing under glowing moons, blessed answer to sincere, desperate pleas. Time flew, I saw Hope had freed my aching heart. Night came, you came, ending our sad months apart. Robert J. Lindley, 5-06-2017 Sonnet( 11,10,12,11) Syllables Per Line: 11 10 12 11 0 11 10 12 11 0 11 10 12 11 0 11 11 Total # Syllables: 154 Total # Words: 106 Part two of -- Hope and its greatest treasures,,,,,

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Date: 5/8/2017 9:58:00 AM
A lovely sonnet Robert where a ray of sunshine breaks through the dark clouds that gathered in the first part of your sonnet. Just like Elpis the little dragon fly Sprite in my 'Pandora Salvation' - the symbol of hope the emotion that is found between Despair and Love. Well done ...Maria
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Date: 5/7/2017 9:53:00 AM
Hi Robert, a second, excellent Sonnet in your series. Different emotions play through this sonnet, still as strong as the previous sonnet. To see the light of hope coming through as i read your words. It gave me peace inside. Now the journey is going upward and i wonder where your next sonnet shall take us. As always Robert your words hold the reader in their thrall. I already await your next exceptional write. This also has to be a seven and a fave. Your Friend Always....Mike.
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Date: 5/6/2017 11:01:00 AM
Another solid Sonnet, Rob! You mastered your emotions into words of hope and freed is your pain away to dust. Awesome, I really like it a lot... Hugs :) Kina
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