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On every Sunday, throughout my childhood, To Nana's and to Grampa's, by the shore ... Oh, nothing else has ever smelled as good As what would greet us, just inside the door - The mix of wondrous essences, galore! In the oven, always something baking ... Our dinner simmered on the stove, as well, Grampa's cherry pipe tobacco making A strangely-sweet and captivating smell, That cast my senses with a luring spell. So many things affect us in this life, And most of our sensations go away ... It's been four decades of adventures, rife - Most memories are brief, or gone astray, Yet I can smell that house ... until this day. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Any Rhyme Form - An Early Childhood Memory" Poetry Contest, Line Gauthier, Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "The Scent Of Baking Bread, The Scent Of Clean Sheets Fresh Off The Clothesline" Poetry Contest, Sara Kendrick, Sponsor.

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Date: 4/28/2018 6:20:00 AM
Greg, my dad smoked 'roll your own' cigarettes made with Prince Albert tobacco for years. I can still smell that aroma in my mind. So I can identify with the Cherry pipe tobacco smell. Today's cigarette smells are repulsive by comparison and I haven't smoked one in 45 years. Your mind for weaving great reading poems is remarkable, my friend. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/29/2018 1:06:00 AM
Thank you so vert much, Curtis - I used to sell Prince Albert in my family's pharmacy, (and yes, we DID get calls of "Do you have Prince Albert in a can? Better let him out!), so I know it well! Blessings, my friend! (I quit in 2005 after about 40 years). :-)
Date: 4/26/2018 4:01:00 PM
Worthy of award...well done as usual. bbn
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/29/2018 1:03:00 AM
Many kind thanks, Barbara - so appreciated! :-) <3
Date: 4/25/2018 8:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Greg, wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/29/2018 1:03:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve! :-) <3
Date: 4/25/2018 6:00:00 PM
I know one thing, the kitchen in this picture is heaven scent. Love your nostalgic images that are so vividly portrayed. Congratulations and blessings, Janis.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/29/2018 1:03:00 AM
That's very sweet of you, Sian, thank you so much! :-) <3
Date: 4/25/2018 2:18:00 PM
Back again to congratulate. Took me back....
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/29/2018 1:02:00 AM
Many kind thanks, Susan! :-)
Date: 4/25/2018 9:53:00 AM
Reminiscences well conveyed, Greg! CONGRATS!! Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/29/2018 1:02:00 AM
Thank you so much, Janice! <3
Date: 4/25/2018 9:32:00 AM
Your nostalgic imagery is beautifully penned, Gregory. Congrats on a well deserved silver medal.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/29/2018 1:02:00 AM
Very kind of you, Line, thanks so much! :-) <3
Date: 4/25/2018 6:43:00 AM
Took me back too. Smells, evoke a sad, happy memory for me. One when my mothers perfume helped me find her, in what to me then was a jungle, I was lost. I have a poem on Soup about that one. Your memory, very tasty, lol, a very enjoyable read, congratulations on your second placement Gregory, Mick
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Date: 5/29/2018 1:01:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Mick, I will have to track that one down! Blessings, friend! :-)
Date: 4/1/2018 7:37:00 PM
Congrats, Gregory. I'll never forget the smell of my grandparents house. Well done.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/4/2018 7:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Randy - I will never forget mine, either - it was wonderful! Blessings, friend! :-)
Date: 3/30/2018 8:29:00 PM
Lovely. Congrats on your winning poem, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/31/2018 6:48:00 AM
Thank you very much, Line! :-)
Date: 3/30/2018 7:29:00 PM
by the way, the color of the kitchen you showed here is kind of how mine used to look in color until my hubbie descrated it by painting it a dark brown. He did a horrible job painting the cupboards, etc. Uggg. (he just never liked that light color i had originally picked out)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/31/2018 6:47:00 AM
Oh wow ... I personally do not like to be surrounded by dark colors in my house - I rented an apartment once that had a black bathroom, and I HATED going in that room! Light, cheery colors for me, please! ;-)
Date: 3/30/2018 7:28:00 PM
You created a lovely picture of nostagia, greg. Cherry pipe tobacco? I never heard of that one! Anyway, Congrats. This list has NO losers. I am loving all the poems!
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Date: 3/31/2018 6:46:00 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea - yes, we used to sell it in the family drug store and it is called "Paladin Black Cherry Pipe tobacco" and is still available! The aroma is intoxicating! Blessings, Friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/30/2018 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful poem as always ... congratulations on your nice win ...
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/30/2018 1:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Probir - blessings, my friend! :-)
Date: 3/30/2018 7:56:00 AM
Beautiful, Greg! CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/30/2018 1:03:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Janice - blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/30/2018 7:12:00 AM
Such vivid memories Greg, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/30/2018 1:03:00 PM
What a wonderful comment, Jan - thank you muchly, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/30/2018 2:03:00 AM
Nice on Gregory, congratulations on your win... Mick
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/30/2018 1:02:00 PM
Very kind of you, Mick - thanks so much! :-)
Date: 3/30/2018 1:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Greg on your win with such a fine poem.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/30/2018 1:02:00 PM
Thank you very much, Subimal! :-)
Date: 3/29/2018 10:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Greg! Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/30/2018 1:01:00 PM
Happy Easter, Eve, and thank you so kindly, Friend! :-) <3
Date: 3/29/2018 8:30:00 PM
Congratulations on this win with this poem of memories!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/30/2018 1:01:00 PM
Very kind of you, Susan, thank you so much! :-) <3
Date: 3/29/2018 10:53:00 AM
Thank you for participating in the contest. Congrats on your placement in the contest. I really liked the flow, rhythm, and rhyme in this one. The rhyme scheme did not feel strained or forced. Thanks for dropping by my blog. For some reason I can not do replies to comments. I have sent Administration an email but have not heard back from them. Sara
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/30/2018 12:59:00 PM
Thank you so much for the appreciation, Sara ... blessings to you!
Date: 3/29/2018 9:39:00 AM
You're aware that I don't spend much time on PS, but I do check in on your contest entries. Here's another example of a 'contest' not really being a contest. All entries receiving first place does not a contest make. Your talent level far exceeds the average 'poet' on the site. Write what you feel deep inside of you, Greg, and not allow your sensitive words to be guided and judged, and in most cases misjudged by others.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/30/2018 12:58:00 PM
That's very sweet of you, Lin, and I thank you so much for your support ... I will do my best to stay true to my craft, and not to write for any other purpose than creativity, and do so with honesty and integrity. Blessings, Dear Friend ... it is such amazing kindness and encouragement that keeps me going! :-) <3
Date: 3/26/2018 7:49:00 AM
That's true, how we remember these things and you have written about it so well :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/26/2018 5:38:00 PM
That's very sweet of you, Heidi - this was such a joy to write about and remember ... every time I think of that house I can smell the glorious aroma in my mind - I'll never forget it, as it always puts a warm smile inside my spirit! Blessings, Dear Friend! :-) <3

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