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from warm lungs come white clouds, humble gift of myself simply heaven bound--beauty of cold wintry days winter shows what I would not otherwise ever witness

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Ink Empress

Date: 12/5/2023 3:35:00 AM

Ah i dont remember the last time ive written a sedoka, I definitely need to write one, i love your wintry poems dear sara, ah warm cuddles are the best on a winter night. I love the way you’ve written “ white clouds humble gift of myself” and “ winter shows what I would not otherwise ever witness” what a positive outlook on winter. Pleasure always reading you . Sending you light always

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/5/2023 5:05:00 AM

thank you, dearest Ink, for stopping by and for your thoughtful comments. I'm grateful you appreciate my wintry poems. I'm not a winter fan so I feel the need to find something beautiful and positive about the cold days ahead. Doing so helps. Wishing you a pleasant winter day :-) smiles and hugs, Sara

Silent One

Date: 12/5/2023 3:29:00 AM

all seasons have their own imagery, I guess and winter brings that in the physical and mental sense.. a deep short poem Sara..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/5/2023 5:04:00 AM

thanks for stopping by, Silent One. True, all seasons have their own personalities, their own imagery...nature is beautiful. I appreciate your comments. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 12/4/2023 11:19:00 PM

lovely write awesome read

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/5/2023 5:03:00 AM

thank you for stopping by, Yolanda. I appreciate your thoughtful comments, Have a splendid day, Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/4/2023 8:39:00 PM

Every season has its wonders and winter is no exception. Tom

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/5/2023 5:02:00 AM

thank you, Tom, for stopping by and for your comments. Much appreciated! Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/4/2023 8:07:00 PM

Priceless! :) Gershon

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/5/2023 5:02:00 AM

thank you, Gershon! Have a blessed day, Sara

Paige Hind

Date: 12/4/2023 7:13:00 PM

Simply beautiful..."what I otherwise would not express" indeed.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/5/2023 5:01:00 AM

awww, thank you Paige. I appreciate you stopping by. Have a great day, Sara

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/4/2023 5:03:00 PM

from warm lungs come white clouds, humble gift of myself. That's some incredible imagery my friend.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/5/2023 5:01:00 AM

thank you for your kind words and for the read, Jerry. Wishing you a splendid day, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/4/2023 4:08:00 PM

Your poem is masterfully crafted dear Sara, with your exquisite imagery painting a vivid picture in the reader's mind. Your choice of words seems almost celestial, as they enhance the inherent beauty of the poem even further. It is through this artful expression that the true essence of cold wintry days in winter is unveiled, allowing us to witness a spectacle that we would otherwise never have the opportunity to behold.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 12/4/2023 4:22:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, dearest Sotto. I am grateful for your complimentary words regarding my imagery...and that almost celestial feeling. I'm touched, for even your comments are poetic and a delight to read. I agree...winter allows us to see what we might not otherwise see...therein is winter's beauty and awe. Hope you have a pleasant evening..your poetess friend in Texas, Sara