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Heat Wave

HEAT WAVE I can’t get over it Last summer was so mild But now the Gods are making up for it “Suffer ye sinners!” they say Aside from the obvious - Sweat A slight loss of appetite Listlessness Reluctance to rise A sudden genius for not-working excuses I notice it in my cat “My God!” I holler to my wife. “I think Tabby is dead.” Tabby lay on the living room floor stretched out full-length “She doesn’t even move when I call her name – Tabby! Tabby! My God! Tabby!” I’m wringing my hands Do I dare touch her? Do I really want to confirm my worst fear? But I do… I touch her That soft hot fur I can’t detect any breathing Tears are starting to well Then Just a faint twitch of her tail She rises suddenly Walks slowly off Quite annoyed As though to say – “Why the hell you have to touch me man? Why you wanta bother me? Don’t you know that the best thing a long-hair kitty can do in this heat is SLEEP!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/13/2010 5:55:00 PM
omg Daver, this had me giggling out loud! we had the heat wave too, and it sure did a similar number on us, our cat and dog! you wrote this so very well - but of course! thanks for your very sweet comment, you sweetie pie. so appreciated. hugs, shar xo
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Date: 7/7/2010 8:06:00 PM
LOL Let sleeping cats lie! I did have a cat that got quite hot and was sick for days after staying outside (while I was off fishing) in 100 degree heat. After that day, I kept them inside in air conditioning. Your poem had me really worried. The Northeast is experiencing extreme heat now -- perhaps Michigan is as well? Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/7/2010 5:19:00 PM
awesome one,, and the cats getting spotlight hehe,, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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Date: 7/7/2010 11:26:00 AM
Hey, it's Nikko, not Nikki. hahaha. But that is what I used to WANT to call her since Nikko seemed like a guy's name to me. It 's very fun here to meet people like NIkko especially when I am talking to them like the opposite sex for a while. heehee. LUv, Andrea ps.Glad you are enjoying her great talent. I am surprised you had not seen her here before!
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Date: 7/7/2010 9:12:00 AM
You sure got me chuckling with this one Daver ^_^-- I could just picture that cat being soo annoyed with you--such a joy to read! and ta-da!! here I come tumbling out from the folds of mysteries and into your comments inbox! thanks to Andrea for reminding me of you-- I'll make sure to read more of your awesome writes ^_^ --nikko :)
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Date: 7/7/2010 7:07:00 AM
really enjoyed this poem as I have a long-haired kitty who also just lays around when it is so hot ! Well done!
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Date: 7/7/2010 2:51:00 AM
a Cat nap destroyed, it's amazing what summer's heat does, but it cannot be all bad if one is inspired to write poetry like this. Excellent stuff Harry
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Date: 7/6/2010 7:05:00 PM
ahahahhaah. GREAT one, Daver. Love it!! That cat is smart. (and hey, don't you have air conditioning there for all those poor kitties of yours?) Hey, you are friends with Nikko, aren't you?? If not, you better meet her! LUv, andrea
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Date: 7/6/2010 4:08:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Daver. I hope you plan on being here and writing for years to come. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2010 9:32:00 AM
Enjoyed this...hot here too, and my air went out the hottest day last week.. Such is life.... thank you for your comments on my patriotic piece..i agree with you...I love The NationalEmblem,,,Love, BG
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