Heartsong

My love, my heart is broken.
Our goodbyes left unspoken.
As time goes on, I will hold you inside of me.
Safe in my heart while we're apart.
Forever two as one we'll be.

I see your face in my dreams
And sometimes wake to my screams.
You're gone but do I want to live without you?
No one can know; my tears still flow.
Each night the pain begins anew.

I will honor you all the days of my life.
Death is not the end; I'll always be your wife.

Someday we'll be together.
Don't mind the stormy weather.
Blue skies will return sending the gloom far away.
Sunshine will erase this frown from my face.
Then, we two shall have our day.

A sunny day, just a rainbow away.
Rustling leaves whisper in trees as they sway.
Calling me to come, "Where are you?, Where are you?"
I'll be with you soon; when my life on earth is through.

Beyond the clouds, we'll fly high.
Two lovebirds kissing the sky.
No longer wondering what lies beyond life's door.
The earth can mourn but, we're reborn.
Two souls, one love, forever more.
Two souls, one love, forever more.


Inspired by the music to Kyu Sakamoto's #1 hit song
'Sukiyaki' (1963 U.S. release) and the crash of JAL Flight 
123 on August 12, 1985 with the loss of 520 passengers 
and crew. Kyu Sakamoto was among those who perished in the crash leaving behind his young wife. This is her song.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/31/2015 8:47:00 AM
Nicely done Janece congrats on the top spot..
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Date: 10/31/2015 12:21:00 AM
Janece, Congrats on your nice win, have a nice one on Halloween, LUV SKAT
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Date: 10/30/2015 6:25:00 PM
Big congratulations to you, Janece. This must sound great put to music.
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Date: 10/29/2015 11:27:00 AM
Back to congratulate you once more, Jan. Hugs!
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Date: 10/28/2015 12:19:00 AM
A beautiful write that deserved resurrecting for a worthy win. Congratulations, Viv x
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Date: 10/28/2015 12:02:00 AM
Congrats on superb win Janece with this amazing write!
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Date: 8/30/2015 12:08:00 PM
such a Beautiful reflection of a REAL Love....I am sorry for your loss but you gained a new guardian up Above....I am sure you will forever be watched over and protected....because the Love you described can never be neglected....;)
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Date: 8/26/2015 9:54:00 AM
What a beautiful lyric, so sad and heart wrenching, which is proof of hitting a home run in this contest! Congratulations!!
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Date: 8/25/2015 10:27:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb win Janece with this awesome write!
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Date: 8/25/2015 1:12:00 PM
Nice win.... SKAT
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Date: 8/23/2015 7:02:00 PM
Janece, so nicely written. I enjoyed your words and the rhythm throughout. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
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Date: 8/23/2015 1:58:00 PM
Janece, wonderfully penned for the contest A7 and thanks for visiting my poem, tattered pages
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Jan Terry
Date: 8/23/2015 5:56:00 PM
Thank you, BW. Love your work. You are on my watch list so I won't miss a word you pen. Hugs. Janece
Date: 8/23/2015 10:32:00 AM
You created a beautiful song with the inspiration of the music. I have not even listened to this music yet, so I really ought to! Way to go for you trying it out. I have done some of these contests with music and I know they can inspire very meaningful poetry like this one.
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Jan Terry
Date: 8/23/2015 6:00:00 PM
Thank you. That music has been running through my head for weeks. Lol. Don't think it will stop anytime soon. Good thing I love that song. It was something new to try so glad I was able to put something together. Hugs. :) Janece
Date: 8/23/2015 3:58:00 AM
Simply beautiful, Jan. If you were able to submit this before the deadline, I think this has a very good chance of getting Craig's nod. I'm glad you are posting again. hugs!
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Jan Terry
Date: 8/23/2015 5:32:00 AM
Thanks, Kim. Had to ride out a funk (writer's block). Had many poems started just ran out of juice and had to step away. Went back to the mountains to renew myself. We'll see if it helped. As always, thanks for the encouragement. Hope you're feeling better. Hugs. Jan
Date: 8/22/2015 8:01:00 PM
This is so so beautiful I really really love the final two stanzas! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx 7
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Date: 8/23/2015 6:09:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. I appreciate that you always take the time to read and comment on my work. I like to follow your work too. Reading the poetry of others is not only enjoyable but helps me tune my work with all the possibilities. Thanks for the input. hugs. :) Janece
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