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*** I thought our love would be for forever; but you threw it away saying whatever. The hurt I felt was like a stabbing knife; thinking for sure this would end my life. I could barely breathe or even speak; taking to bed feeling so mentally weak. My heart and soul hurt with heartbreak; weeping so many tears I could fill a lake. Then, I realized that the sun still did rise; and rejected love like ours soon dies. And thanks because you were not the one; a waste of my time and now we are done. Yet, a part of me will always remain broken, because of all the words we left unspoken. "Love is a wine sometimes bitter, sometimes sweet." ______________________________ October 29, 2019 Poetry/Couplet/Heartbroken Copyright Protected, ID 19-1192-168-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the FTI Blog Series - Heartbreak Brian Strand Podium Place 1

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Date: 10/30/2019 8:31:00 AM
You brought the emotions out with this piece. Good luck in the contest. Blessings Rick.
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Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2019 10:30:00 AM
Richard, thanks for the comment and it got Podium Place 1 !
Date: 10/30/2019 3:20:00 AM
Painful to read. Great write!!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2019 10:31:00 AM
Swetha, thanks for visiting, oh yes love can be both beautiful and bitter !
Date: 10/30/2019 2:06:00 AM
Very nicely done though sad! Dear heart you are an amazing poet!;)
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Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2019 10:31:00 AM
Brenda, thank you so much for the wonderful compliment !
Date: 10/29/2019 12:07:00 PM
I can feel the heartbreak in your words! Nicely done, Constance. ~Mark
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Constance La France
Date: 10/29/2019 6:14:00 PM
Mark, thanks for the compliment, appreciate !
Date: 10/29/2019 10:57:00 AM
Dear Heart, How sweet a heart that aches. How long memory of lost love takes. “Hearts are made to be broken.” ? Oscar Wilde
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Constance La France
Date: 10/29/2019 11:30:00 AM
Richard, what a lovely comment and true for it is better to have loved and lost than to never loved at all....is that a famous quote? Not sure ? It just came floating!
Date: 10/29/2019 10:34:00 AM
Hello! I learned from each relationship MY part in how it crumbled. I like this saying, "relationships do not end. They just take on new forms." With one ending, where I blamed the man...we got to meet and chat several years later. It was so great. I got to see how we both destroyed a relationship without knowing it. Sometimes people are destructive, though Best wishes,PRxx
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Constance La France
Date: 10/29/2019 11:27:00 AM
Panagiotis, my dad was a man of sayings and he always told me to never burn my bridges for you never know when you want to go back.. I think he would have really liked your comment. Thanks so much for visiting!
Date: 10/29/2019 10:11:00 AM
May all your future glasses be sweet
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Constance La France
Date: 10/29/2019 11:24:00 AM
TS, my glass is full and it has nothing to do with love, thanks for your visit!
Date: 10/29/2019 9:46:00 AM
Boy, I have been there you just describe part of my like my friend, so well done!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/29/2019 11:23:00 AM
Bobby, thanks for visiting my poem and for the compliment!

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