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I am taking the bus to you, holding a red rose on my lap- The sky is blue, and my deep grief is true . . . Oh, there is a past history, where my heart has been so broken. A jagged piece gouged out of my soul, from this strange puzzle that is me- One part was stole, yes, there is a deep hole . . . Oh, my love is no mystery, can you hear my sad tears spoken. The past is the past I am told, but no, I just cannot let go- You must be cold, in this deep tomb so old. . . . Oh, the wind is so blustery, as I stand here, Mom- heartbroken. _______________________ May 13, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Heartbroken Copyright Protected, ID 18-1021-891-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym.

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Date: 5/16/2018 6:35:00 PM
Very well expressed, shocking at the end...MOM. If this is the reality, I am so sorry for your loss. Beautiful tho sad.
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Date: 5/14/2018 3:47:00 PM
What a beautiful, melancholy poem, Constance, and I love the rhyme pattern which I notice you used in your dream poem as well. Best of luck in the contest. John
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