Heartbreak

I am alive, and I’m breathing, but each day that I live my heart is breaking, it has an intense pain. How much can my poor heart take? I have lived and seen too much hate. That my heart is breaking, I’m still looking for that silver lining, I’m afraid my heart will give out before it comes. I am supposed to still hope in hope? Alexis Y. 03/24/2021

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/26/2021 1:32:00 PM

Yes you must continue to hope. Someone up there loves you.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/26/2021 12:20:00 PM

Excellent, intense clever! Love this Alexis. Well penned. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/24/2021 1:51:00 PM

Perhaps you can find some comfort in faith, Alexis. Maybe you can find hope in our declining Covid numbers. A lot of people seem to have given up because of the long period of isolation and handling restrictions. Hang in there. Hope seems to be returning now. Hugs, Carolyn

Judy Ball

Date: 3/24/2021 1:27:00 PM

The Bible tells us to lose hope is a sin because that means that your faith has died. Great write here, God Bless, JB

Jan Allison

Date: 3/24/2021 12:06:00 PM

powerfully penned Alexis, we need to cling on to hope my friend:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/24/2021 11:40:00 AM

I am well known for saying, "Opportunity strikes everyone in the face every day of their life but most people never see it because they believe opportunity is still around the corner!" You need to open your eyes to the opportunities to change your life how you want it to be! Aloha! Rico

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/24/2021 10:51:00 AM

Dear Alexis, I found that those who have suffered much still cling to the rose of hope, life has many thorns but God's petals are smooth, once we understand the power of Mercy and Love, thank you for sharing with me, your precious self. Be well. :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/24/2021 9:21:00 AM

Love will always prevail over hate, because God's love is our beacon and our hope. Your poem is well expressed and touching, Alexis. :) Evelyn

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/24/2021 8:22:00 AM

Powerful verse Alexis, we must never give up on hope and we should all strive for a better tomorrow. Tom

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/24/2021 7:26:00 AM

Yes, hope is a living thing and God will always give us the hope we need to keep going, keep trying, keep relying on His wonderful love. He is alive and breathes hope through our lives... Love to you always dear friend, God bless you. Love, Gina

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/24/2021 7:02:00 AM

Yes, there is always hope for a new tomorrow no matter the depth of our heartache. I enjoyed reading your emotive and expressive work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara