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My heart's held hostage by three words, love, fear, and doubt; share equal thirds. And countless tears have wet the ground, for hope, once lost, is seldom found. You know just how to make me cry, and when you do, I want to die. And I swear that my love is true, for my heart's closed to all but you. Skirting the fringes of insane, you acquiesce to mounting strain. And view love through a fog of lies, where shadows deceive blinded eyes. Your sweet disposition turns sour when you try to exert power. And you treat me with such disdain, anxiety feeds off my pain. Do you no longer desire me, would you like me to set you free? For if you care for me at all, why would you want to see me crawl? Here I stand, broken heart in hand, stuck in emotional quicksand. But before my heart can repair, I need to hear that you still care. (Rhyme) 4/24/2017

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Date: 5/26/2018 6:59:00 PM
Raw emotion, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/26/2017 2:10:00 PM
Emile, what a beautiful and honorable stand! But, if you are being treated with disdain, that person is probably toying with you and doesn't deserve you. A 7:) Amitiés
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Date: 4/26/2017 6:27:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Marie, I truly appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 4/25/2017 5:46:00 AM
Wonderful poem with so much of emotions... Beautifully expressed... Loved it... Thanks for sharing... A big 7...
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Date: 4/25/2017 9:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Supraja, for this vote of confidence and encouragement. Emile.
Date: 4/25/2017 12:38:00 AM
Yes, sometimes love hurts but it should be mostly joyful and produce trust and contentment. Hopefully, this sincere poem from the heart will result in both for you, Emile. A 7+ for sure!
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Date: 4/25/2017 9:48:00 AM
Thank you Carole, for taking the time to give me such a encouraging review, Emile.
Date: 4/24/2017 11:49:00 PM
You put your naked heart into this one Emile! A very touching and beautiful piece. What woman could resist a beautiful plea like this? 7 ; )
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Date: 4/25/2017 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Connie, as always my friend, your comments are always most welcomed and eagerly sought, Emile.
Date: 4/24/2017 6:45:00 PM
I'm getting hard in my old age, Emile. She doesn't deserve you! Heart wrenching poetry, though.
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Date: 4/25/2017 9:50:00 AM
Thanks Sunlite, you know how to create a smile, Emile.
Date: 4/24/2017 5:52:00 PM
A gentleman, in doubt but yet requiring honest answers. Why won't the loved person respond honestly & end the suffering? (U capture all this without anger or bitterness. God be praised.) Shalom, shalom Friend. SEVEN
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Date: 4/25/2017 9:46:00 AM
You are very perceptive and I welcome your thoughts. Emile.
Date: 4/24/2017 5:16:00 PM
The honesty of feelings resounds in a gentle way providing this piece its exquisite plea, emile... truly a joy to read you!..huggs
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Date: 4/24/2017 5:34:00 PM
Thanks Nette, it is always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/24/2017 5:02:00 PM
Beautifully written and a feeling I have known at times very well. I always wonder why, why if someone loves you they treat badly and then I just decide, they don't really love me or at least not like I do them. Really nicely done Emile.
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Date: 4/24/2017 5:33:00 PM
Thanks Chris, as always my friend, your comments are appreciated, Emile.

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