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Head Stone

Weeping Willow weeps, streams capturing the souls of life. Raw, dark, lonely, no escape, deer visit mostly. People stop by all the time, bearing flowers to give out.
Crying sadness, yearning for understanding. Rack your brain for a reason. All that sits there now, is a headstone on the ground, with memories all around.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/13/2011 4:29:00 PM
very nice description, vivid, and strong....
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:00:00 PM
Nice and stunning expressions , good luck in the contest, cory
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Date: 6/12/2011 5:38:00 PM
Nice chokas, Cory. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/12/2011 5:19:00 PM
Very Nice Poetry Cory, - Kylie
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Date: 6/12/2011 2:21:00 PM
a super dynamic emotionally charged write ..luv the Choka form for this piece cory.. great visuals and nice effect at the end with the headstone luv..
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Date: 6/12/2011 1:50:00 PM
CAN SEE EXACTLY WHERE U R COMING FROM,NICE READ
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Date: 6/12/2011 1:48:00 PM
My mind is with you and loss at this moment pondering how to write a love sonnet when all I have now is memories of loss? SO far NO go! Thanks for your kind words. I would cheer you up if I could! Light & Love
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Date: 6/12/2011 11:32:00 AM
Excellent Poetry my Poet Friend... well written piece..... Enjoyed much...Michael
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Date: 6/12/2011 11:23:00 AM
I love this cory,, deep and sad emotions for a tree.. flowers will brighten any tear.. thank you for sharing and how are you doing... taking care of nature i hope,, and the beauty of your new yard right... take care,..p.d.
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