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This poem was inspired by my very dear friends' contest to make her laugh.

My boyfriend proudly said, “ You’re not gorgeous!” Then, he turned back and walked away with his pouting red lips and high heeled shoes. Feb. 12, 2013 This is a fictional short poem, hoping to make you laugh this time! ; )) First Place Contest: Make Me Laugh Judged: 3/18/2013 Sponsor: Greatest Poet PD/Linda

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Gerald Kithinji

Date: 9/16/2013 9:53:00 AM

Come back! You high-heeled, red-lipped twit!

Red Omara

Date: 5/8/2013 12:28:00 AM

Congratulations, Leonora. Made me laugh, alright. And I'm obviously not the only one. A brief but nice idea.-Red

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/20/2013 2:58:00 PM

Terrific, Leonora. Congrats on a well deserved win. Nice going, my friend. hugs, Ralph

Hidden Sister

Date: 3/20/2013 1:28:00 PM

Yes too funny! Jen

Donna Jones

Date: 3/20/2013 9:55:00 AM

Congrats Leonora....well done....Donna

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/20/2013 5:03:00 AM

Lol smiles on your congratulation winner. Warm Smiles, Connie

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 3/19/2013 7:55:00 AM

Congratulations my dear friend Leonora on your win...It's indeed funny and deserved a grand win!!! cheers!! Love, Maria

Painted Hunter

Date: 3/19/2013 6:13:00 AM

Haha...good one. Congrats!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/19/2013 12:50:00 AM

Many congrats for this goegeous write and win.

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/18/2013 9:27:00 PM

LOL... Congratulations on the win.

Ray Dillard

Date: 3/18/2013 7:18:00 PM

My goodness! Congratulations...I think!

Roy Jerden

Date: 3/18/2013 6:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Leonora!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/18/2013 5:48:00 PM

lol... Leo, my sweet and favorite poet...this one still had me laughing out loud with the image... thanks for the giggle... even though i read this one before... i needed the laugh... and funny imagery... always, xox~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2013 11:12:00 PM

hahaha, this is GREAT, Leonora, Love this silly side of you!!!

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 3/12/2013 10:43:00 AM

nice one dear friend, you brighten our day with this great poem of yours. you make me smile before I sleep...time to go to bed...my eyes hurt for watching 4 movies in a row while writing poems at the same time.....God bless you always!! Maria