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He Takes Care of Me 'Cause He Loves Me

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He takes care of me 'Cause he loves me Fixed into his fern green eyes he stares back with mischief while I'm soaring. He moaned three little words, "I love you", loved how it rolled of his tongue. He loves with soul and heart holding tight and never letting go until days goes by and the nights chase. She takes care of me 'Cause she loves me. I took in her beauty, auburn curls, spattering of freckles across the bridge of her nose. Dragging in a breath not once did her gaze waver there was no denying the appeal. Pounding of drums, love swirling round, entwined two halves of a whole a longing melody forever. We take care of each other 'Cause we love one another 5/1/2018 Poetry Contest: Free Verse on Love Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Date: 5/5/2018 3:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your win. Beautiful poem, touching the heart.
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Date: 5/4/2018 10:02:00 PM
Beautiful, Eve. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 5/4/2018 6:52:00 AM
Ahh you have explained your love so beautifully, a really nive piece of poetry and an enjoyable one to read, congratulations on your placement and do you know that there s a song, piece by piece which contain this phrase, " he takes care care of me cause he loves me " it s a sad one but really nice song, good luck
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Date: 5/3/2018 11:29:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve on your win.
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Date: 5/3/2018 10:39:00 PM
Enjoyed. Congrats!
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Date: 5/3/2018 10:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement. Breathtakingly beautiful! Well done.
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Date: 5/3/2018 3:03:00 PM
Love so beautifully expressed in your poem, Eve. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/3/2018 2:51:00 PM
awww how sweet lovely Eve! So romantic and full of passion, beautifully expressed...Thank you for entering and congratulations on your placement...be blessed :)-luloo
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Date: 5/2/2018 8:32:00 PM
Lovely piece of free verse, Eve. And fern green is a great colour. Good luck in the contest. Viv x
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Date: 5/1/2018 11:52:00 AM
This left me with a peaceful smile
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Date: 5/1/2018 8:36:00 AM
I like how it tells the story from both points of view - usually it's only from one side - very creative!
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Date: 5/1/2018 7:59:00 AM
Splendid rhythmic piece Eve, this should do well! Lovely. My best to you in the contest! xomo!
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Date: 5/1/2018 7:14:00 AM
Lovely romantic verse Eve. Good luck. Tom.
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