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He Said She Said { Footle }

her lips his eyes just flips tells lies her nose his ears just glows snipped spears cheekbones his chin like stones looks grim eyebrows lashes just wow flashes

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Date: 5/2/2009 2:05:00 PM
cute footles ...creative write n good luck in the contest! love n smiles Maryam*
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Date: 5/2/2009 12:02:00 PM
Wow! This is so creative. Nice use of humor. Best wishes in the contest. Karen
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Date: 5/2/2009 8:41:00 AM
Best wishes with this original write Katherinergds Brian
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Date: 5/2/2009 8:27:00 AM
well , i guess that at a certain age you would have to "snip spears" and "tell lies"when everything "looks grim" and you really need theos back "flashes". jhl
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