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He Said, She Said

He stays high above In quadrants pretty unknown Where love, joy exists as one Below she looks up “Save me from the end,” she pleads He says, “Save me, I am dead” Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 1/7/2012 6:41:00 PM
Death is but a distant shore, where we go to, when shuts the door, of ignominity, reside we do, this other place, reach back for 2 communicate, and there we get the difficulty, we're interstate:) in dubious illiteracy.... thanks Russell....Don
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Date: 1/7/2012 2:48:00 PM
Are you describing a dream here, Russell? Your words fit the sedoka pattern well.
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Date: 1/7/2012 1:43:00 PM
Yes nothing but smiles always from your work,, that my friend is the mark of a true Poet.... thank you for all your kind comments and for your work you share with us....Michael
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Date: 1/7/2012 12:10:00 PM
I like this Russell. You are one of the very few writers that I really enjoy reading as I am not a huge reader (but you make me be :)
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