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He Captured Childhood

He captured childhood, never let it go, Sidestepped the potholes of “growing up” Never forgot that ice cream is better when shared Popsicles meant to be broken in two Throwing stones in the pond an avocation Skipping them….an art He still slurps his soup as taste has consequences Milk moustaches, especially chocolate, an art form He still wipes his hands on his pants Will pet a wet dog, tell “that” joke again Wear that favorite frayed flannel Flirt with the cashier at the super market He will make fun of everything and everyone And sometimes keep it to himself More often though he leaves them shaking their heads Wondering…”when will he ever grow up” He knows, that they know, the answer Probably never…if we’re lucky

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Date: 10/4/2024 12:19:00 PM
Where is he? That would be my match. Growing up is a pathway to ageing.
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Date: 10/4/2024 6:50:00 AM
Hello John, How charming is your well-inked poem that truly celebrates the enduring spirit of childhood. You have embodied a stubborn character who refuses to conform to adult expectations. Yes, societal pressure to "grow up," takes a lot away from childhood. Well Inked! Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 10/4/2024 6:13:00 AM
Now there's a man I know....just a wonderfully sensitive and detailed portrait of a soul that refuses to be contained. Love it...very creative.
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Date: 10/1/2024 10:10:00 PM
How refreshing to read about this character that prefers being just free and never grow up really! I think its a beautiful thing to just never grow up. Haha, i dont think i completely ever did! Love the moustache line the most! Made me think of my son when he was lil! Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always
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Date: 10/1/2024 8:14:00 PM
'Portrait of the artist as a yong man.' ~ James Joyce
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Date: 10/1/2024 7:54:00 PM
He sounds like he knows true happiness John....oh the complete joy of our inner child!! Nice poem.. Debx
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