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He and She

He had a blind date At the dancing club Choosing a nice suit With a tie to match Dressed in a hurry To be there on time She was his blind date So happy with delight A new dress she bought It was sure to please With new shoes to match They met in the hall At the small dance club Their eyes met at once Cupid aimed the arrow Love directed the heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/25/2018 4:47:00 PM
I like a happy ending. Your poem has this and a feeling of excitement as the two get ready to meet that evening.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/25/2018 5:13:00 PM
Hello Alfred, My pen just flowed with these words.My heart had a lot of feelings when writing.Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 3/25/2018 12:24:00 AM
A heart warming story Darlene. Tom
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/25/2018 10:28:00 AM
Hello Tom, that is what my pen wanted to create in poetry. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 3/24/2018 7:06:00 PM
really nice;
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/25/2018 10:30:00 AM
Hello Daniel, thank you for your lovely comment. My pen and my heart created this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 3/24/2018 5:50:00 PM
Really nice Darlene. This felt good to read.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/25/2018 10:36:00 AM
Hello Chris, thank you for your lovely comment I wrote this poem with my heart and pen. Peace and Love and Joy.
Date: 3/24/2018 5:40:00 PM
So sweet Darlene :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/25/2018 10:37:00 AM
Hello Heidi, thank you for your lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

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