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His stare was stark We'd never know what behind his eyes We'd never know what in his deepest mind He looked up, His tears fell down The red rose tattoo in his right arm With the scorpion one in his left could not cover his downfall feelings We know he's tired We can see it from his eyes He used to be tough, he used to be strong Now, He fades his spirit away Just don't give, you can't give up Father!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/31/2011 7:58:00 AM
Such devotion to your father in this poem. Appreciated to hear your take on his his last days. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/25/2011 6:39:00 PM
Creative and nice expressions of sentiments, Prima
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Date: 5/24/2011 9:05:00 AM
super imagery Prima and a wonderful expression of deep emotion .. so lovely are your lines of creativity ..luv.
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