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Bird Staring Northern Mockingbird - Free photo on Pixabay

*Image of Mocking Bird At A Lost by Pixabay. Hawaii's mocking parody - hiku shrewd mocking birds stay docile in passing we must mock them 2022 February 12 *1st Place* A STRAND (1075) ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 February 17

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/17/2022 11:07:00 PM

Beautiful William. Congratulations on your First place win! Aloha xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/18/2022 12:32:00 AM

Mahalo nui, Connie, knowing that mynah birds would not have faired well, anyhow, it worked for Gregory Peck, why not, Aloha~William!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/17/2022 5:01:00 AM

A very beautiful haiku with a beautiful image. Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/17/2022 3:51:00 PM

Thanks and true, Christuraj, words and image, a tell-tale eased, Aloha~William!

Jcb Brul

Date: 2/17/2022 1:51:00 AM

Stunning haiku with profound imagery. Congratulations.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/17/2022 2:55:00 AM

Many thanks, JCB, always welcoming my friend, Aloha~William!

John Gondolf

Date: 2/16/2022 2:39:00 AM

Enjoyed the read, William, the mockingbird is the state bird of Texas, I always enjoy listening to their many different songs. John

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/16/2022 3:08:00 AM

The missing piece of the puzzle, Hail Lone Star John, loving the country music/musing that regales our shores, much appreciated my friend, Aloha~William!

Bill Baker

Date: 2/12/2022 11:34:00 PM

I like it, Hilo. Keep them coming! Bill First time visitor to your poetry.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/13/2022 12:32:00 AM

Welcome, Bill, interestingly, I recently did a name change from William Kekaula (actual name) to Hilo Poet, Hilo being my hometown on the island of Hawaii. Thanks for sharing my friend, Aloha~William!

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/12/2022 11:23:00 PM

A Change of name, but the poetry still tops love this, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/13/2022 12:22:00 AM

Harry, pith-on pivotally as it defines you my friend, Aloha~William!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/12/2022 7:19:00 PM

I lived on Oahu for three years in the ‘80s. I remember the myna birds, rainbows, papaya trees, ocean and being in my twenties! A great time! Love your haiku! Aloha!

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/12/2022 7:55:00 PM

The '80s were also my twenties, ah what memories, alas, 'twas during my San Francisco bay area years--cherished. Thanks, Kim, for your shared expressions and laudation my friend, Aloha~William!

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/12/2022 4:45:00 PM

William, This is a lovely and hilarious Haiku; you chose ludicrous over amusing, which I think is brilliant.

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/12/2022 6:34:00 PM

A bit of levity amidst the pandemania hoverance, Lasaad, "methinks that the lady doth protest too much" (re my photo image of, 'oh my?'). Aloha my friend~William.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/12/2022 12:24:00 PM

I like this. Good one :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 2/12/2022 3:42:00 PM

I chose hilarious over funny, Aloha~William!