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Hawaiian Vacation

One rainy season of my life I took a trip to Hawaii where The Maui Isle awaited me For two long weeks, without a care. The beach called to me with its sand So clean and white and warm as toast. I filled my lungs with ocean air, Inhaling to my innermost. My room was eleven stories high, I could see the ocean all unfurled. Suspended between the earth and sky I was insulated from the world. No fog or smog was shielding me From beauty of the bright blue sky. The January sun came shining through With warmth it borrowed from July. I felt a peace I'd never known. I loved the island's relaxed way. The natives set an easy pace. Tomorrow is another day. The flowers with their sweet perfume, Were like no flowers I'd seen before. I stored them in my memory vault, To keep them with me evermore. When each day's sky is full of clouds And all of time is dullest grey, My mind will wander back to where Summer's just one airplane ride away. won 3rd place in vacation contest

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Date: 5/21/2010 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in the contest "Viva Vacation" sponsored by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2010 7:02:00 PM
congratulations on your success with this lovely flowing verse. 'The January sun came shining through With warmth it borrowed from July.' What a marvelous line. I wish I'd thought of it...Well done Joyce...margaret
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Date: 5/6/2010 8:35:00 PM
Congrats Joyce. I knew this was a good one - Seems LMB did, too.
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Date: 5/6/2010 5:40:00 PM
It sounds so heavenly!! And so was this poem, Joyce! Congratulations on your win!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/6/2010 5:15:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your 3rd place win in my Viva Vacation contest.. an amazing write ..appreciate your support.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 5/1/2010 9:49:00 PM
Joyce, this is wonderful, and I think it is gong to do great in Linda's contest!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/1/2010 7:40:00 PM
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Date: 4/29/2010 4:52:00 PM
Sounds like a terrific place to be! My ex in-laws went one time for two weeks, I know they loved it too. This was a beautiful poem of a trip you will never forget.
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Date: 4/29/2010 7:08:00 AM
sure sounds like a dream vacation, Joyce :0 would love to visit Hawaii someday :) just a typo in your title for the word "Hawaiian" hope this helps :)
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Date: 4/28/2010 7:41:00 PM
Nice poem Joyce. Been there, done that, want to do it again - especially now after reading your poem.
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:36:00 PM
What a lovely trip that must have been....I love the line where the warmth was borrowed from July!! Clever! Good luck in the contest, Joyce!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:24:00 PM
Good luck in the contest
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Date: 4/28/2010 5:50:00 PM
sounds like a good one, hope you added this to the contest,..p.d.
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